Reviews for Where Love Went Wrong
Guest chapter 6 . 8/6
Was he really choosing between 3 girls ?
Brooke was a rebound from Peyton and ended years ago and Lindsey was a rebound from Peyton again/as he couldn’t let Peyton go

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Dreamerdreamer247 chapter 6 . 7/28
This is interesting so far! It’s kinda a trip down memory lane with all the big moments of each relationship. I like how you are pretty unbiased too when writing the chapters. Honestly I have no idea who Lucas will end up with. Though I hope it’s Peyton cause I am a die hard Leyton fan! It’s funny how the therapist was like “are you gay”. The more I think about the show and Lucas the more I realize what a crap boyfriend he was. I mean he cheated on brook multiple times and Lindsey! And him and Peyton were just terrible in the fifth season! That’s kinda why I like AU because then they’re usually all fluffy lol. Though I am excited to see where you take this story and who Lucas ends up with. I know there are many Brucas fans reading this so I’m guessing it will end with Brucas but personally I’m rooting for LEYTON!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/5
Oh my. No I know Quentin died it was mentioned this chapter. I mean because he died and Sam is barely on the picture it can't be too long since Brooke's attack or Julian making an appearance if he will?
Guest chapter 6 . 7/5
If Lucas was did not call anyone at the airport and Brooke did get beat up, as the therapist mentioned already, then is Quentin dead? Was Lucas there for Brooke after the attack? Has Julian shown up? Will he? Exactly how much time is there since Lucas' failed wedding and his first therapy session?

Dan, Chris, Karen, Rachel
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 6 . 7/3
I loved this one a Brooke .Everythig hbe said about her the good and bad times. It mad me sad that they didn't end UP together. And just reading and remembering all Brucas things they did have more ups and downs. But that is what is supposed to make you ,stronger.

As for characters to write about :Rachael, Dan,Chris and his mom .
nena chapter 6 . 7/2
It's great to see Lucas make progress for his emotional/mental health. Him going back to being everyone's very good friend. He is usually at his best then. I usually view him as a glue of the group- before he left.

I like the parts you used for Brucas. Dont worry about not using my suggestions, they are after all just that- suggestions :D Brucas imho has always been Lucas' hardest relationship. I even confirmed it with his dream at the airport with the 3 girls. Wonder if that dream will come in this story. Anyways, like you mentioned they had a lot of more struggles during their relationship and I hate the timing so much for doing that to them. I have a lot to say about them but I will stop. lol.

For Lindsay's chapter Im really intrigued. I feel you have more creative leeway since she has a limited amount of canon. She also was devastated by Leyton ,so as Brucas fan it was easy to empathize with he. I look forward to see what you write for them. I mean Lucas was going to marry her.

If you want to write about other character I would say Dan, Chris, Clay...Rachel.
dianehermans chapter 6 . 7/2
this chapter was so wortht wait
Brucas chapter 6 . 7/2
I really like this update. It was sweet, can’t wait for this Lindsay one. Also, can you make this a Brucas story, pretty please?
Tina Geller chapter 6 . 7/1
Hey guys! The author here! Like I said I'd love some help with the story. First off : Personally, I feel that the writers did Lindsey dirty. I mean, it was stressed that Lucas was in love with her, but barely anything was shown about them together. And Lindsey was created to be a bland character. So I've decided that I'd develop my Lindsey's character...since, this is a semi - AU fic. Secondly: From Chapter 9 onwards the writing and setting of the story will change. So, from there, I was thinking about writing about new characters too. But there are so many and I love all of them . So, I'd love some help choosing :
Chase?
Clay?
Quinn?
Mia?
Karen/Andy/Lily ?
Rachel?
Owen?
Dan?
Chris Keller?
I'd love to write about 4 of any of these characters. I'm dying for suggestions on this ;)
Anyway, one more thing..Nena had written about how I should write about the Red door scene..Sorry, but I should've specified that I wanted a moment where they're a couple. But that was a great suggestion.
Anyway, thanks guys!
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 5 . 6/18
Sorry to hear of your personal crisis. Hope all is well. Update when you are ready. Your readers will wait.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/12
Will you be updating?
nena chapter 5 . 6/10
Thank you, you flatter me. :) I'm sure you had a good idea of what to write and didn't required my help. I hope things are well with you.
dianehermans chapter 5 . 6/2
take al the time you need

xxxx
Guest chapter 5 . 6/1
Hope you’re okay, please don’t feel pressured into getting this done if you’ve got personal issues.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/24
Can you please update
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