I'm not going to comment on the SMT stuff, mostly because I've never played the games and have no idea what's going on with that. Aside from that, though, I've enjoyed the story so far. Honestly, my biggest complaint is that you kinda take the Rin abuse a bit over the top. I understand why, but it's kinda getting a little excessive. Also, the Nasu aspects of the story really kinda take the backseat to the SMT stuff, to the point of a lot of the characters being wholly unrecognizable from their canon fate versions. Nasuverse magecraft is really interesting as well, and I'm not especially happy that it basically gets thrown out in favor of SMT magic. It's a fun read, but it might as well not be a Fate story in the first place with how much is overwritten in favor of SMT stuff. I'm having fun reading it, but I'm not really happy with it if that makes sense.

Well, we now know who the potential Messiah is...

Eh, well written story, but Sakura is just too OOC and plainly an asshole. Not to mention, I don't like how you just up and made her the most powerful being, because True Magic and TYPES along with Apostle Ancestors are a thing in nasuverse.
Overpowered main characters have never been my cup of tea. Good day to you!

Law, Chaos, Neutrality...
Which side will you align with?

I am curious, with Bluebeard out causing Cthulhu levels of havoc around the world, will we see Dante around?

(Or Raidou if we’re basing the Japanese Nocturne story here?)

Looks like Gil use the cheat code of youth.

Then again, he has that David Bowie look to him.

Ahhhhh finally, Sakura gets the pampering she deserves! And who else but a group of Succubae to pamper the daughter of Lucifer himself? Also i finally looked up what Louis looks like, for some reason i was just picturing him as a black-haired Igor. He looks far nicer, fitting!

I know Very Little about SMT, having only ever dealt with Persona
I know that Order is very much OBEY YHVH WORSHIP at worst and Society at best, and Chaos is Free Will and choice at best and ANARCHY at worst.
All that said? I legit cannot wait to see what else Sakura does with her powers, she's strengthened herself A Lot.
Also Luvia is back for her SHERO

Hahaha thanks for another great chapter! The ending was hilarious!

Thank you for the update. The interactions between characters this chapter were hilarious. Looking forward to more whenever your schedule allows.

Until death do they part...

Shirou's advice to Sakura during their discussion about not letting family/blood obligations and expectation define them at the chapter start is good advice. I thought perhaps Shirou had grown from his Vortex World experiences as he said that, but he then states he will continue to pursue his promise to his father. I can see why Sakura would feel somewhat sad.

Loved the introduction of Luvia, her and Sakura make a good comedy rival act. Since Sakura is a half demon and Luvia is a half goddess, will Shirou be regaining his powers from the Vortex World to be an equal to them (perhaps in life span as well)? The answer may be wait and see :D

Meew, cat fight!

I wonder...