Epic.
Priyanka is going to become one of my favourite characters in this story if this keeps up. Good job! :D

Whoa
It's amazing.
I love it even more.
...when did he get that bruise...HMMMM

Corruption. Well this is not going to end well.

Poor Twoie.
He didn't deserve any of this.
Poor Steven.
Knowing that one day, he'll be Twoie.
Seeing his future so bleak.
Great story.

OH YOU CLODS
TWOIE'S FROM THE FUTURE
HE KNOWS WHAT TO DO
TRUST HIM YOU IDIOTS
gah
why am i screaming
why am i screaming

Twoie. If it wasn't for the fact I'm not in your dimension, I would walk right over and tell you this.
Guess what? I get that you are mad at the gems, but they are trying. Please don't forget that.

now i feel dumb for talking to him like he is real. But he feels real to me.

You make the characters come to life. You make it so that things are the same, but different. Minor characters are actually affected. I love this story. Thank you.

Nice, Midnight in Me is such a good song from the MLPEG universe. I'm really glad Connie's mom is becoming good friends with Twoie, I really wish she had helped him more in the show.

I love the inclusion of one of the best songs to come out of My little pony friendshil is magic. I love this story

I love this story. Can't wait for the next update

amazing cant wait for more