Oh this is just hilarious. Loved it.

interesting ideas. A time loop for ones so young. The only problem I have is the use of F*** so much, it does nothing to the plot other than show how old they actually are. Even then, Not really needed. In fact, it distracts from what is leading to a good story. This is only my opinion, not meant as a criticism.

I'll just commence worshipping you, now.

Love this.

I like the fact that we’re left guessing as to how and for how long the gang has been stuck in the time loop. Keeps it interesting

I’m really enjoying this so far. Like all your characterizations—Dumbledore’s reactions should be very fun to read

This is rather funny