...OK so this was started after the manga ended. Honestly, I was expecting at the start that it turned out Ichigo had given Tatsuki his shinigami powers*, but "White"/Hollow Ichigo/Luna...what ever you want to call him is Zangetsu. He is both his Shinigami powers and Hollow powers their is no difference nor separating them. Old man Zangetsu is his quincy powers (that are pretending to be his shinigami powers) that while a part of his powers are suppressing his true power.

*Therefor why he turns into a hollow because he doesn't have Zangetsu/White anymore, therefor no hidden shinigami powers, and Urahara not fully realizing this. Also the hollowfied spirit altering her making her more viscous.

I really want to know what Ichigo is doing.

Another brilliant installment! Great job! I am dying to know what happens next! :D Tatsuki got dominated! Her first loss, it was, and a humbling experience for her, I bet. I have a feeling that she has an inner hollow of some sort that she inherited from Ichigo. It seems Gaia is going to help her, like Yhbach did for Ichigo, at around this time.

Perfect and update soon please

Ichigo zampakuto secret came kinda Earlier than Canon ( he know his zampakuto Is Also a hollow ,the Other i think you implies don't know It?)
Will the secret of zaraki zampakuto came earlier? (His liutenant yachiru in not a regular shinigami at all in thruth She Is his zampakuto Nozarashi)

Pretty badass fight, can't wait to read the consequences on Soul Society as a whole( maybe some critique of them as they not even let Rukongai use technology). See you soon.

Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I am dying to know what happens next! :D So it seems Keigo and Uryu were defeated Soifon rather than Tousen. Well a least she was merciful and didn't kill or badly injure them, so they will be fine... probably.

Nice dialouges, curious to see more and same requestions.

Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I am dying to know what happens next! :D She managed to defeat Renji which is quite impressive as even Ichigo had trouble with him. But the next challenge is going to be on a whole different level and I have a challenging time imagining how she is going to pull off what was basically a fluke for Ichigo without some serious Batman-esque plot armor. Let's see if she can pull off what amounts to a miracle.

Impressive chapter, can't wait for more. And don't worry as you will never do a job worse than Kubo in regard to power scaling.

Sorry Stupid autocorrect
Did you kill Renji ?

Did you kill Tennis?

Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I am dying to know what happens next! :D I believe that Gin is vastly stronger than Toshiro right now, as he is shown to be capable of killing Aizen if Aizen didn't have the Hogyoku and basically become immortal. It isnt just a matter of Hax either, as Aizen explained that a battle between Shinigami (or any spiritual beings for that matter) is a battle between spiritual pressure. Where a high enough spiritual pressure can resist if not completely overcome Hax as he demonstrated against Soifon. Aizen was Transcendent at the time with a far greater spiritual pressure than normal and yet Gin still managed to hurt him and almost kill him if not for the Hogyoku reviving him, as we know that even Base Aizen had at least twice the spiritual pressure of the average captain. So Gin is obviously at least comparable to base Aizen's Reiatsu or Bankai would never have been able to hurt Aizen. Sure Hitsugaya has potential to be strong one day, but as Shunsui Kyoraku stated, it would take Hitsugaya 100 years to surpass him.

Brief, but very cool chapter, I love how you portrayed the villains. Then, could you write 'rewrite of '(orginal story name), please? Sorry if I'm annoying, of course. Keep up the good work and see you soon, I'm sure you'll keep improving.

Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I am dying to know what happens next! :D I see so they managed to win but at great cost and Mayuri got away so it was a pyrrhic victory. Nemu was nice enough to help her enemy even though she didn't have to.