| Reviews for Broken Crown |
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   PadrePedro chapter 13 . 7/29 Would Salamis do for a female? It is good to be filled with so much hope! |
| PadrePedro chapter 12 . 7/29 I think it is a great story - well worth to read. Sighing deeply I have to confess I wished that I could write good stories myself! |
| PadrePedro chapter 11 . 7/29 No review from me this time, I have too much of tears in my eyes to type properly. |
| PadrePedro chapter 10 . 7/29 I try to breathe! Deap breaths! Poor Boys, so in deep problems . . . And you tell the story well, deeply touching! |
| PadrePedro chapter 9 . 7/29 So the shores of Avalon are invisible to the living? I always learn from reading! Thanks for this chapter! |
| PadrePedro chapter 8 . 7/29 Oy Vay - this IS not going to be good! But at least Arthur knows the reason, and the threats, so I am confident they will live to learn from this, both of them! |
| PadrePedro chapter 7 . 7/29 I guess prince Arthur is in for many surprises, isn't he? And many more are in store for us readers? Yes, I think that makes a great story! |
| PadrePedro chapter 6 . 7/29 That is why I do like this - the untied ends, the secondary questions coming from the knots . . . |
| PadrePedro chapter 5 . 7/29 Oh Uh! So THAT is why there is another future for them than that which was once prophecied - magic can not only forsee the future, but sometimes it is powerful enough to change it! Thanks for this chapter - I love the little scene with the dice, by the way! |
| PadrePedro chapter 3 . 7/29 OH dear, oh deAR! What a speach of Gwen! Who could guess that she and not magic per sé would change Camelot from the very foundations! Thius is good, Lya! |
| PadrePedro chapter 2 . 7/29 Merlin is really committed to help - and the very surprising last thought of Arthur's . . . you are good at writing and have great cliffhangers! |
| PadrePedro chapter 1 . 7/29 SO! Now they both know of each other, but neither has any idea that the other knows. What a thrilling beginning! |
| Moonlover04 chapter 13 . 6/30 This story keeps getting better, I can’t wait for Arthur to realise that his fate lies in Merlin’s hands! Thanks for the update |
| Taz chapter 13 . 6/29 Destiny has been turned on its head. Mordred's attempt to avenge the druids' slaughter is hopefully all that will ever happen on that count. Will Gaius be more courageous in this universe? |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/22 Excellent chapter. I'm quite worried for Arthur. Btw: " Since he did not have to be Arthur's busybody " I think you mean dogsbody. Dogsbody is a lackey. Busybody is a person who gets into everybody's business. |
