wooooooo jim finds out about underwelt!
i love how he threatened harves
also "and honestly, you're not my type" LMAOOOO JIM BE WILDIN
update soon

annnnnd the plot thickens!
i love how tiena hates jim right now but saves him anyway lol
great job, update soon!

i can totally imagine clark getting drunk silly lmao
i stan jim x tiena already and they had like one conversation
update as soon as you can dont leave me hangin!

wOOOOOOO and they finally metttt!
this story is great! keep it up! 3

This is REALLY good so far. It's really hard to find quality Treasure Planet fics these days since the fandom is like, almost dead. I usually never even go near fanfiction with OCs of any sort, because I've seen wayyyy too many authors make her a Mary Sue and completely mess the story up, but I'm happy to say that you have not screwed up your OC yet (and hopefully it stays that way lol). You've even managed to get the personalities of all the characters down so far, which is really nice. It's way too early in the plot to be sure of character development etc, but I look forward to your next update! I can't wait to see what you have in mind for poor Jim and Tiena...*rubs hands together mischievously*