nice, please do more

Thank you so much for this chapter but if this is the end of the story then I thank you for letting me read it

WOW YES I LOVE THIS GREATNESS
Ahem. This was an excellent chapter that changed the original draft in a good way. :) I LOVE it. And it was well worth the wait.

Mm, I like that you're attentive towards the relationships forming between all the characters. Emma's doing her best to be so brave with all of this; it's very endearing.

The subsequent action was easy to follow, as well. The newly included transition bits DO broaden the story quite a bit and render it more believable, so your goal was most certainly met.

I am wondering, though. It sounds like Emma may be sitting out of "The Darkness Below"? It's one of my personal favorites. But if she is, I trust your judgement. You've clearly got a good plan going.

Whatever you've got in store, I look forward to your next installment!

Superb! As always, despite the long wait, it’s always worth it! I adore that it’s a lot more realistic than before, and we don’t dive face first into the action, and the emphasis on building a friendship with the Toa! You are doing an awesome job! Please keep up the great work! We believe in you!

If Emna's story takes place in the MCU than it would be cool if she and the other Toa Terra would appear in the final fight during Avengers Endgime. Would be fun to read a one or mayby two shot story about that.

I have noticed a little plot hole in your story. It' amazing so far by the way but in Toa asemble you said Emma was born in 2000 and since Emma is 13 in the Legends of Terra saga therevis no way Legends never die could have been released back then. I know it's a amazing song but it might be more handy to use a song that is already released in 2013. Wake me up inside from Evanescence is a great examble for the concert shene Emma will do when she returns to the human world after Web of Deceit. Hero from Skilled or songs from Transformers just like What have i done or New Divide could be good exambles too.

LOVE THIS. I always wanted to read a human/bionicle crossover! Great job, keep it up!

This is a pretty awesome story so far, I like how your incorporating the books into this revision, I’m wondering for her to get a buff in this world is that in a world purely composed of protodermis (the stuff that makes up the Matoran universe and comes in multiple forms and can alter itself so drastically) that due to the fact there is no non-normal organic material for her to eat and drink that she consumes both protodermic food and pure protodermis (the equivalent of fresh water in there world) her body is slowly converted to organic protodermis, the only true difference to her original form is that she is both physically stronger, faster and has a regenerative factor faster then most normal humans. She wouldn’t be biomechanical like the Toa (80-20 mechanical to organic ratio) or like the Glatorian (60-40) but she would be able to live a long life among them

Say, when you get to it, will you cover the Rahi, Bohrak and Bohrak-Kal sagas?

Found the original, and then this newly revised version on your profile when I snooped a bit (trying to find as much good Bionicle content as I can). It's a really fun read, and I'm glad you're not just pulling from the movie.

And while I don't typically go for OC-centered content, I've found myself liking Emma very much.

(As for COVID-19 and the United States...yeah. It's frightening and this administration is handling it very poorly. I'm not going out on the town any time soon.)

Do keep writing! I'm thoroughly enjoying it.

Av-gi, I am feeling it! This truly feels like a part of the first book in the Toa Metru series of books. The bet between Nuhri and Emma, gold, just absolute gold! You've truly outdone yourself on this one!

Aaaaa! The long awaited chapter 3! Blessed be are we! The first was nice, but THIS is truly SUPERB! Such quality writing, and so true to canon, an absolute masterpiece and pleasure to read! I eagerly look forward to the next chapter and will most certainly recommend this to my fellow Bionicle readers! Please keep up the good work and remember to look after yourself in these trying times! We believe in you! -MagicalMooseCake 3

*looks up what deity means* *Tries not to start and argument*
Chapter 3 was even better than last time I read it! I am loving where this is going, it's so so sooo good! I have no questions, no critiques. I am just impressed. Very impressed. :)

NICE!