Reviews for A Legacy of Chaos: A Ship of Line Story
stylo1 chapter 8 . 21h
100 square light years. because space is 2 demensional
Guest chapter 8 . 9/5
I love the story, you should post it on spacebattles or sufficientvelocity, you'll get more comments and feedback as well as have the most cherished of things available... the like button!
Guest chapter 8 . 9/5
good story
Bluesnowman chapter 8 . 9/7
Awesome
Raiju001 chapter 8 . 9/6
I am still enjoying the way that this story is going! Keep them coming as I really want to see where you take this. It sounds like it is going to be very interesting times!
sh777 chapter 8 . 9/5
Thanks for the update. Long live the Minmatar
kamikage86 chapter 8 . 9/5
Hope Xander has good contact with the Asgard and helps them, I really do.
aceron chapter 8 . 9/5
Thanks for the wonderful chapter.

I thoroughly enjoyed how you combined the first iteration of the Alterans as the beings that banished the First Ones from earth, before the second iteration (i.e. the Lanteans) kick out those that had returned and created the currently version of Vampires. It creates a semi-realistic explanation how the Slayers have only existed for thousands of years while the Old Ones were banished millions of years before.

I thought you would use the New Eden cloning technology as a means of assisting the Asgard, though I did not think you would introduce it so soon; wonderfully done without pushing too much information at once.

I would like to thank you for your hard work and dedication, and hope you are well in these dangerous times.

Keep safe and healthy.

Your fan,
Aceron
BoredKing chapter 8 . 9/5
This chapters are decently long but its honestly feels like nothing is happening. Hopefully next chapter things begin to pick up, unlikely but a guy can hope. Don't get me wrong I like the world building but we're 46k words in and the most exciting thing to happen so far was Xander dying.
Maben00 chapter 8 . 9/5
a really great chapter i love it! and i can't wait to read what might happen next when you have the time :-)
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 7 . 8/30
Yeah, I was excepting the Asgard.
SSSra chapter 7 . 8/28
a good chapter, i liked how the chapter went. hope to see the next chapter soon
Slim A Lou Prime chapter 7 . 8/21
I am liking this story looking forward to more!
Quintain Apprentince of Alduin chapter 7 . 8/16
Even though I don't know much about EVE Online or Buffy the Vampire Slayer (The latter IS on my long list of shows I need to watch) you still managed to catch my interest. Good job.

My only complaint would be chapter length, but I understand that it is hard to write a long chapter at times.
Quintain Apprentince of Alduin chapter 5 . 8/16
Only regret for Senator Kinsey's death: He now cannot be told off by Thor.
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