Worse than a shitty machine translation

I like it but…correct your spelling and grammar errors pwease

Bro, you spell at a first grade level

interesante y tiene la trama de otra solo que seria Yoshino, esto es solo mebuki o tambien habran mas mujeres

A good start but a few grammar issues or wrong spellings, but other then that I like it and cannot wait to see more.

Mister steal ya girl is back

You usually I don’t Read your stories because of what you do to Kushina turning her into a whore so that kind of brings me down but this one gladly read it

Nice start.