| Reviews for Ben 10: Reincario |
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   Starlord Master chapter 8 . 10/21 Odd times. |
| Starlord Master chapter 7 . 10/21 This is getting hot! |
| Starlord Master chapter 6 . 10/21 I love Kickin' Hawk! |
| Starlord Master chapter 5 . 10/21 Ding dang! |
| Starlord Master chapter 4 . 10/21 Good dialogue. |
| Starlord Master chapter 3 . 10/21 So fun. |
| Starlord Master chapter 2 . 10/21 Thank you, Paradox. |
| Starlord Master chapter 1 . 10/21 Lucario is the best. |
| MUILucario chapter 6 . 7/16 Hey, Ee-Arth, that’s exactly how King Cold pronounced it in Dragon Ball Z Abridged. |
| spacerswap chapter 6 . 7/9 Ooh! Oooooh! I like this story! Maybe after this you could do 5 Years Later? (You know what that is, right? If not, it's basically this really good fan-continuation of Ben 10 and Danny Phantom) |
| Omarnosian10 chapter 7 . 6/30 Is Christine related to Jennifer? They both have the same last name. |
| TonyMon318 chapter 6 . 6/26 nice story so far, think the plumbers will create a Poke Ball for Lucario? |
| Trald1994 chapter 5 . 4/10 Btw about Lucario not being used to 1 vs many remember he fought in a war with multiple pokemon on the opposite side. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/29 I like the way you’ve set this up so far; I have a good sense for the characters, and your action is pretty good. Though, I would suggest you split up some of the massive paragraphs. Some of them cover a full phone screen, and that makes readers less inclined to read all of it. As for the plot...it’s a bit early to say, but here’s my current thoughts. I’m willing to suspend my disbelief for the explanation(believe me, I’ve seen isekai that make much, MUCH less sense than this one.) The way you made Lucario proactive was appreciated, and you foreshadowed multiple possible conflicts later on. No major flaws so far, so expect me to keep reading. |
