| Reviews for Ash's Alola Story |
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  Guest chapter 5 . 7/27 Please update |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/22 Please update |
 UltimateCCC chapter 6 . 5/22 Ash will have to realized that Lillie is Lillie and having her remembering her past self will not bring her back completely. |
| UltimateCCC chapter 5 . 5/17 Ash is in for a challenge. |
| UltimateCCC chapter 4 . 5/17 The Nebby in the bag is so old. |
| UltimateCCC chapter 3 . 5/16 Technically she's reincarnated. |
| UltimateCCC chapter 2 . 5/16 Which Meowstic? |
| UltimateCCC chapter 1 . 5/16 Watch the anime. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/1 Please update |
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/21 Please update |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/26 Look I know your working on this story for a while just curious are you going finish your kalos story any time soon? You had that over a year and 30 chapters so far sorry to bother you. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/25 Please update |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/24 Will we see ash bring back other Pokemon he caught from previous regions he's already been to I would love to see him use his older Pokemon not just the ones in Aloha one of them he should definitely bring back are greninja primape hunter infernape pedgieot sceptile and others to ashs Aloha friends deserve to see the other Pokemon they never knew he had before and can learn alot from ash to and be able to witness just how much of a powerful trainer ash is |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/24 Please update |
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/20 Please update |
