babby regulus i hope you live on this timeline

I love the fact that he is grateful for all the things she will pass throughout the pregnancy

I enjoyed this story and the length of chapters, I think it progressed well but you left me wanting a little more. The end seemed a little abrupt. Up to the birth of Liam it had been such a short amount of time covered and then bam it was over. I’d have loved to have read a bit more about Harry, Ron and Hermione from Maia’a perspective. I do question if they’d even be friends in the new timeline as I imagine harry being such a different character without the Dursley’s

Overall, I like this story and it was entertaining. I was a little surprised at the ending that their children were told the truth. i cannot imagine children being able to keep a secret like that. I'm glad that Regulus survived and that Lucius was a defector. Thanks!

I don't like these time travel fics, however this one was well done. There are a few problems, though. Hermione wasn't all that fond of Professor Snape, though she didn't hate him the way Harry, Ron, and Neville did. Why doesn't Hermione mention Remus Lupin and his new wife Nymphadora? Both of them also died *and* left behind Teddy Lupin. Wouldn't it make more sense to have her going back to save all of them?

Why include the mention of that potion Snape needs to be taking for years? This seems to have slipped beneath the radar. Also, it's not necessary: they get rid of Voldemort and prevent the whole series of events that lead Snape to Voldemort in the Shrieking Shack where he's fatally bitten by Nagini. A couple of rough spots that could be fixed.

Too bad the story is over. But thanks for writing it. This epilogue was a perfect modern version of "And they lived happily ever after." :)

It was a very good story. I don't usually like Snape centered stories and have never read a Hermione/Snape story before but this was very enjoyable.

awe they are off to such a great start!

What a beautiful ending! I wonder how her younger counterpart will end up? Will she be as happy as Maia?
It doesn't matter because Serverus an Hermione are happy!

Love a young Severus
Thank you for a wonderful read

This was a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing. Keep smiling.:-)

Bravo! I really enjoyed this story.

This is a great ending. Very well done..It is great that their son is best friends with Harry Potter. I'm surprised that Maia and Severus told their children about their past. They are smart children. They may have figured it out. Thanks for a very different story. ps

Great ending to a great story! I'm surprised they told their kids the truth. Thank you for writing and sharing it!

Awwww. Happy ending! Yay!
I loved reading your story. Good luck with future works. Thank you for writing :)