i love how when uncle Logan gets back, everything goes chaotic for a hot sec but he somehow manages to put everything back together. we love uncle logan. Ahh i like the character work in this chapter , like even though most of the characters here are young, you really make them not just kids, but kids with complex inner lives. stellar examples would be Raven and Kitty . Like both are guilty and both are trying to do the right thing but just through the dialogue i can tell the nuance of how their personality and age affects how they are trying to “deal “‘with kara. Speaking of Kara , i don’t know how you do this thing, again where she’s not just a kid, but a feral kid and despite her logic being obviously different from us, it still makes100% sense , I don’t question the authenticity of it. Yeah big fan, solid chapter. great character work. More of This, more of uncle logan and kara and pls more of jason and remy ( jubes should be part of the gang, like fireworks would just add to the mayhem)

So glad you updated. The story is getting very interesting. Please update soon

Yayyyyyyyyyyyy Logan is back!

So...you weren’t kidding about the length. and it’s ok all is forgiven because WOW this chapter. It’s nice to have another Kara centred chapter again and one that focuses on how she feels ... and i just love how you write her. Like i can see where she’s coming from like as a kid but it’s also different enough for me to believe she’s a feral. Also the seeds planted in this chapter. I love your interpretation of Rahne, i always felt like the comics never used her that well and here you are. The relationship between her and Kara just makes so much sense (and it’s adorable ) Side characters are great too. Tabitha is the perfect mean girl and Jason is a joy as always. i just feel so bad about Kitty and Rogue tho. the painful thing is I get where they are coming from and that also hurts because Kara so obviously in need of friends and they want to be her friends, it’s just hard trying to cover up fear from a feral. Ugh solid solid chapter. Dying to see uncle logan’s pep talk

I KNEW IT . ok that final part with kitty and rogue... where Kara smashes the table. like i said, Creed’s part of her backstory isn’t he... or else i don’t see why she would have such a visceral reaction to him being mentioned, or is it cuz she’s just so mad at Scott. I love how Kara’s being portrayed here. Like not angry but ... something different like this experience hollowed her from the inside. It’s refreshing. (also love how u caught the whole accuracy of kids being mean without knowing they’re being mean ) Raven calling them out was *chef kisses * more soon?

Oh noooooo! Wait so Kara is an assassin like Natasha but mutant? And her senses are automatically tuned to her enemies? Thats why she won’t stop fighting?

You... you just had me convinced Kara was happily settled in the mansion and now... First of those bullies deserved it, second of all, god damn it scott. ( you just had to get involved ) Pretty sure uncle logan’s going to give him hell for this. Ok apart from that, love the action scenes u write, love them. Quality stuff. that last part with creed tho... like i know Creed is a sicko but how Kara reacted in relation to him... that felt personal... are we getting... backstory ? soon ? yes ?

So he’s back, and wow what a way to pick up where we left off . We love a concerned uncle logan doing his best to help Kara, even if it’s in a very behind the scenes kind of way. kjax, how do u write a scene where there’s like great dialogue and tension but also hilarious ( enough c4 to level the place...) Also that’s a very interesting way to use Raven’s empathy powers. I always felt like in the comic they either never use it or that it was more of a crutch then a gift, so kudos to u for making it such a key part of her character. ( and in character too) Also, Kara? Mother ? Parents ? You’re killing me with the suspense. And apocalypse? based on the previous chapter, is apocalypse... like this version’s trigon? Missing Kara, hope she appears more in the next chapter... which is soon? yes ?

Oooooooooo. That was deep. So Kara is psychic? Or she contains some kind of energy?

Solid chapter. I am officially intrigued. I like the moments that you take to stop and work with your characters. And I love the slow friendships and relationships you build throughout your stories. The friendship between Raven and Kara is solid. It feels genuine and understandable. And it’s simple. I’m a big fan of simple. You have a gift when it comes to storytelling. Keep at it.

love that kara’s go to coping method is just jumping out of windows. Tell me raven is going to learn from this and just bolts them shut because i’m also DYING to know more about our favourite feline. And we have another seamless transition, like last chapter it was still cute x mansion stuff (and i love the cute x mansion stuff ) but damn this chapter got dark. Really dark. (but i guess i should have seen that coming, there was that amazing erik and charles banter ) Next? Soon ?

and tHERE IT IS. hope logan gets to the bottom of that mystery soon. like real soon. i’m really liking the vibe of these chapters, how i’m going from dawww to bone hurt to dawww and just laughing. we love a clueless kitty who just wants to help. . I know i said Jason and remy are my favourites but that scene with mako... and that scene with raven. you know what they’re all my favourites . mako, kitty, raven, kara, jason, remy... all of them

I think you broke my heart there with that last scene... ok i love the little side story with hank and ororo both trying to figure out what’s best for kara and i like that u made her insanely smart in some areas and being unfamiliar with others. (like an actual kid ) i also like how in this cast of *a lot of people * they’re all very in character. even if some of them have just like one line but what i love is REMY AND JASON. more of them and more of them annoying logan. please .

took me a little bit to catch up on this one - damn you ffn for dropping off email notifications on messages! Looks like you're going very Evolution-y here, so I'll just be over here with my coffee as that isn't my flavah.

Enjoying Kara - don't know how the 'vengers' relate to Evo X-Men, so I won't nit pick from my comic book angle of life. lol I am super curious as to what the frak Fury thinks he's doing. No way is he that stupid to think Logan would just ... GO ALONG with him. Please. You new, Fury?

fury LEAVE KARA ALONE . she’s just getting comfortable, let her have this. i’m still trying to get over the fact she thought raven wouldn’t want to share a green day with her, or that she was ready to just sleep in a warm corner of kitty’s room. And all the little x babies who have no parentsss (except for kitty im going to assume kitty has parents ) love how you got all their mannerisms down. especially bolin. baby bolin’s just adorable. He, mako and raven like i know they’re not x men but they blend in perfectly. Raven’s going to be a great roommate i can tell. Also we all love a protective uncle logan. more soon?!