Love the story excited for more! However I did find a couple of places in the story that were a bit hard to follow purely due to the fact there was a lack of a visible indication of a time jump, which made reading some points of the story a bit confusing. Now I’m not sure if the issue is due to me using the FanFiction app (it shouldn’t be, but you never know) or if it was just something you may have missed but I’d thought I would make you aware of it so you can correct it and improve your writing. But other than that as I said earlier I love the story its a very interesting and unique plot that I’ve never come across before. Keep up the good work!

I Siriusly love this story did a little happy dance when Molly went to far so Arthur could become family with his sons again. Love the pairings too. Aww lots of squishy cuddly babies too. Looking forward to the next chapter x

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

Love it so far and seriously can't wait for the next update

only in d 2nd chapterloving it!

Well done! Thanks for sharing.

Yes, get packing!

More family. Excellent.

Molly...ugh.

Collecting friends and allies.

Family!

Nice!

Interesting...

Wowza!

Another great story! So we've gone through the veil and now Harry's been exiled. Does that mean we can look forward to a house arrest story? Not sure look forward is the right term but you know what I mean. LOL.