The premise of the story is definitely interesting. A reincarnating protagonist over multiple worlds sounds like a very exciting prospect, though I dread to think of the sheer work involved in this. Your ambition to make zir into a communal protagonist is bold, just the way a I like it. Welp, I'm following this journey to its conclusion.
On another note, I love the way you've portrayed her emotional turmoil and how she just wants to have a break. I think that you might have overdone it a bit, with perhaps some repetition in ideas, but it's still refreshing to see the amount of detail put in the psychological part of things.

This is unreadable. You might want to repost.