i hope your doing great author-nim!

I've just discovered this story and I really hope you will continue it! Sasori and Hinata are some of my all time favourite characters and it's such a treat to see them together! I'm really looking forward to their development, I think they both have quite a bit to learn along the way.
Needless to say, it's also a welcome distraction from the chaos that's going on in the world right now. I really hope you're well and wish you the very best moving forward!

I hope you can sort out those problems, whatever they may be.
It's a great story. Actually, the best I've read about this pairing, because it's not that easy to come up with ideas to link someone as different as Sasori with Hinata, and I think it makes sense a "disciple route" (or at least is what I think it is). Also, although it's weird and a bit scary if I think it rationally, the relationship between the two is kinda cute. He cares for her though he doesn't admit it (he even kills for her, even if it's not necessary) and Hinata is fond of him. They are both loners, but they understand and enjoy the company of the other, even though Hinata is turning a bit psicopathic and I personally think if that continues that will trouble her a lot. Psychopaths have problems with attachment and she's never gonna be the same anymore.
I'm still wondering, though, what Sasori sees in her. I guess he wants to turn her into a weapon (I guess? Sometimes it just feels he likes her. Like as if she's his little girl), but why? And I also thinks he wants to make her his own disciple, but he hasn't talk to her about his favorite hobby of killing people or turning her into puppets, so I'm not too sure.
Anyway, I'm curious about what's gonna happen the next chapter :)

every chapter is so exciting! sasori and hinata is such a rare combo but you make it work sooo well. their relationship does seem to be a little messed up but the way it’s written and portrayed is super satisfying to read. i’m looking forward to more chapters in the future!

Sasori surely has created a dangerous weapon. I personally think this relationship is a little toxic. Everything Sasori did to Hinata to gain her trust and to use her in the future. But I hope things would change soon, like, he would do things to her that purely because he cares for her, not because of his own gains.
Thank you for writing and I hope you'll update soon.

Im SO SO SO SO happy you came back to this! you can do it!

Tbh, I love the relationship between Sasori and Hinata. I feel like the consequences from this will only push her to rely more on Sasori and harden her against her opponents. I can see her murdering someone in cold blood to keep Sasori a secret.
Also, Sasori killing people who fuck with his living doll is super cute lol

Thank you for updating! I love your story so much, and want more! But I do understand that you have to take care of yourself and things first! Cheering you on!

I really hate hinata’s father. Can easier kill him soon? Pretty please?

I love it! Sasori and Hinata is a rare combo but it really works: if he'd like any child, Hinata fits the bill. I really hope you see it through as so many great fics are abandoned forever

I tought that Hinata would be in team 7 with Sasuke and Naruto, as the top kunoichi and that way involve Itachi, but it seems that wasn't necessary. Waitin for the next chapter! Thank u

Wooow, this is totally new for me and i liked a lot!

Bruh how would he react to Canon nejivshinata? Interesting. But I do want to say that naji truly underestimates hinata so I can see her losing but still getting a shot in with a senbon and a chakra string to his blind spot! That's be cool.

This chapter is shorter than others but still good. Itachi knowing about the relationship between Sasori and Hinata makes me wonder if he would play an important role latter. I'm very curious, to be honest. I'm also very excited about the Chunin exams, particularly when Neji nearly killed Hinata. Surely Sasori wouldn't let that pass haha.

I hope she calls him Senpai lol. I rather like this story. Pls keep up the good work