when will the avengers be coming in? kinda wanting to see harry/wanda, or sif, or even hela, as for the record, hermione is far from this perfect being you have her as, quite frankly i hate her, she is and was a bitch, a know it all, acted like she was better than everyone simply because she can repeat what she reads from a book, verbatim, word for word, i just can't stand fics that make hermione out to be perfect, or act like she has done no wrong

nobody was going to look for him, even if ron and ginny made it back it would take day to move the rubble. but even if they did know where he was only he could open the door.

they either come looking for him or not it is the finding part that is questionable. and how is it that harry knows the limit of someone like dumbledore on how much they can transfigurate?

now he suddenly carries the sword with him?

he grabbed ahold of the wall. pls explain how does ond grap hold of a wall?

harry made his was to a wooden door that sat opposite of the fireplace (a door sat, what a strange way to say that). a small case sat behind the desk. i do believe you skipped a paragraph here.

the stones are to dangerous to be trusted with. that is not proper english

i do not trust anyone who seeks to use the stones. but i must stive to repent for my sins so i leave you the clues... that makes no sense at all. here is a nuke i dont really trust you but this makes up for my mistakes

if you come this far i assume your need is great... yes because everyone comes looking for infinity stones in the chamber of secrets and not a curse breaker looking for treasure.

i also find it really hard to believe that the stones given off as much power as they do have not been found on a world where magic users are so abundent.

salazar slytherin, the year of our lord 1117 AD. why would any magical in that age especially use the saying year of OUR lord and then double up by saying AD. makes no sense

finding another door, the 2nd one at this point and trapdoor, he suddenly cries out in relief, because 3th time is the charm? why would this door come out at the middle of the forrest after slytherin saying all this bs about getting there past the guardian and wards. wards that where not up, nor did voldemort ever find it. (he would never have stopped looking for the stones)

taking the book with him and then hiding it behind some random rock at hagrids house. yup makes total sense

hagrid is still in azakaban at this point.

so many fucking details you got absolutly wrong, worst part they are relative minor ones. its like you just put something down because it is minor so who cares, but it is still incredibly sloppy. it is to soon go say if this is gonna happen with the plot details aswell but im not holding out hope

truly harry tossing his wand here is one of the most stupid things he did in all of the books, and that is saying something, more then that why did voldemort not use ginny's wand to begin with

the entrance was blocked and would need a team of 10 wizards hours to remove. so why then can harry leverage an opening in seconds?

he grabbed a fang and the dairy before setting off. why not take the sword...

the statue of salazar is different in your story.
harry never put the sorting hat on yet the sword still came falling out on harry's head

Update it soon please

Fam this is the most investing hp/mcu fic iv ever found, Harry's drive, the lack of character assassination, the mystery, you have spun something golden here. Hope you write more.

This chapter came off ad completely different to every other chapter in your story, in a weird way. Suddenly, Harry has gone around the bend in obsession. Also, why didn't Harry go through the chamber? He could have gone there over the course of a few months to clear out the rubble. I feel like this is a chapter in a different story, not the one the past ten chapters created.

Very much enjoyed the chapter and the cliffhanger; I am eager to how our dear Harry survives the trap

Only one thing you should know. The infinity stones don't work in alternate dimensions. Maybe say the blast that sent Thanos left just enough of an opening for the stones to retain some/all of their power. But if that doorway is close, the power is gone forever? Just a thought. Anyway, pretty good story so far.

This started out as a really good idea. Original, and unique.
It's rapidly lost that.
Falling into typical fanon nonsense of bashing Ron and making Hermione near perfect. For example, in the books the only time Ron was described as talking while eating was book 1. And in book 3, which this is when this story is based, Hermione was an absolute w(B)itch. And she made just as many WRONG conclusions about the magical world as correct ones.
Be kind to the readers. If your going to write a bash fic, put it in the summery so people know and won't bother to waste time reading it if they're not into it. That's not to difficult to do. It'll mean less wasted time for readers, and less negative comments in reviews since the people who don't like this type of crap won't bother with it.
Also note, Hermione was the one always pointing out the muggle electronics don't work at Hogwarts, so she would never suggest a muggle robot.
Also, Gryphondore have DADA with Hufflepuff. That's it. Slytherian is in a separate class with Ravenclaw. If you bother reading the books, you'll see that they constantly switch which core classes the houses have together. It's only the electives that have all 4 houses, but those never have everyone in a grade. But I suppose that would require you to have some knowledge of the book beyond what you've seen on fanfiction or the wiki page. :\

All that waiting for an update to get a cliffhanger? Fuck you.

cool

So much for him being prepared and why couldn’t he just go through the chamber again if he just took a broomstick

If the traps react to one way, why the hell didn't go through the chamber again? It doesn't make sense at all...

I thought he was prepared? That was a very ominous cliffhanger. Hope you update soon, this ending causes a lot of anxiety. The chapter itself didn't feel like it accomplished much. At the end it felt like filler for an evil cliffhanger. If the goal was to leave me an anxious mess, then brilliant, it worked. Can't wait for the next update.