MORE.

You mentioned him doing truth or dare with Yang why not do a few chapters of that. You could start it with jeanne wanting to have sex but bc of the scare she's still afraid

this shit is wack

Great fic. Though i really wanted Weiss to be pregnant, but well hell it's still good.

I hope they do make babies in the end tho, or the middle.

shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit this was the cutest thing ever id be down if you continued it but fuck its also so good as it is?

Skate, fate, create

yooo I’ma need more chapters holy shit this was great

this was good

you dident expect me to catch the fact you put the konami code in here you cheeky bastard? made me laugh harder than it should have...

This isn't a gripe about the story, but more gripe with...Society? I guess?
Everytime this scenario plays out, one-night-stand-scare, everyone ALWAYS wonders;
"Is the guy gonna stay or bale?"

Again I am not gripping on this story persay, but common, everyone knows Jaune ain't that type of guy. Question shouldn't have even crossed their minds.

What I am gripping about is that we never see concern for the guy. Whenever we do see the guy in a somewhat state of distress, it is presented as him;
"having to make the right dissection!"
"having to gather his courage to face his duty!"
"having to stop being selfish and be there for his love!"
I am not saying stories are BAD if they do this. What I am saying is that there are a LOT of stories that do, and very few stories that show sympathy for the guy in this situation. There a couple, but not a lot.

Now, the guy definitely doesn't have it as bad as the woman in this scenario. He won't have to face any stigma, he won't have to experience the "joys" of motherhood, and unless his name is Tai, he won't have to worry about facing the problem alone.
However, this doesn't change the fact that, this is ALSO happening to the guy. The guy is also having his life flipped upside down, and yet the only thing people are telling him is;
"You better not run from this."

When I say that;
"everyone only pays attention to the girl in these situations"
I am not saying the would be mother should be ignored or is not worthy of sympathy and help. What I am saying is that the guy could also use some sympathy and help.

...okay that is my rant over, liked the story, thumbs up.

You could get the plot of the original story, obviously with the difference that this Jaune and Weiss are together now, it would only be to modify the story a bit.

Yoooww this story is so hot abd wholesome. This story has so much potential. Its like, its more than just a romance one-shot. If you ask me, i want this story to continue as a romance novel fic.

Its asewome, hot, and heart-warming. And in hope you make more chapters for this instead end this story as a one-shot.

Dayum my man! Two words, i have two words to descride this story, "wholesome" and "hot". Im glad someone on reddit recommended me this, keep up the good work! Hope your safe during this pandemic!

this was freaking hot.

but then it warmed my heart. lol seriously what da hell man? good work.

Fate?