it was really good, can I suggest something,
take them to the Eiffel tower or the zoo, try to take them someplace famous, and please put in abit more romance

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I was enjoying it so much! It's been so long since someone has posted a long-ish story for the Medoran Chronicles. You're a really good writer and everyday I would legit check to see if there was a new chapter posted on this story. It made my day when there was.
I loved the Kaiden and Alex moments.
Keep it up and Please update! Please! Please!

typical jordan

That's hilarious )

for a second, I thought that was it

How did Declan know which place it was? Anyway, Love it so far

Sooooooo cute ) what a way to propose!

I love that last part with Declan's gift hahaha

you wrote dis on a phone? Anyway, I've been looking for ages to find a fanfic about Alex's friends visiting Freya! U rule

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I was enjoying it so much and you’re good writer and this is an excellent plot! I’ve wanted a story about these characters visiting Freya for so long.
It’s been so long since I’ve seen a long fanfiction for The Medoran chronicles and I was so excited to see yours.
I love the Kailex. Keep it up and please update!

Please update!
I was enjoying it so much!
You’re a good writer and it’s an excellent plot. No one really writes long stories for The Medoran chronicles anymore so I was so excited when I saw your story.

Please update!

Please Update!
I was enjoying it so much. You’re a good writer and it’s an excellent plot.
I love the Kailex!

MORE PLEASE! So good

The overall idea for the story was a good one, but I feel like you needed to clarify some events, including what happened from when Alex got back into the car to when they were eating. I also noticed that there wasn't much emotion in the writing; we never know how the characters feel.

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