I can’t wait to read more!

Yay this story is so interesting in glad you wrote another chapter and i cant wait for the next one!

I'm new to the world of Daminette so i have no idea on how i should rate this. I'll try though.

I find the hole setup of the story vary ineresting. It is a little weird with the timelines but hay. It's a crossover with MIRACULOUS! So ya i enjoy it a i hope to see more.

May God watch over you a protect to in this time a distress, pain and scared may He help guide you to do good

Love the story. It's interesting and I hope to see more of it.

On the Nathaniel pairing you asked about: I think CholexNathaniel would work better for what you have built up so far in the story, but that's just me.

Hi. Love your story. It's really fun to read.

But the writing is far from perfect. Don't get me wrong, it's well written but your grammar and sentenses need some work.

Here's a few tips:

Don't try to make your sentenses too long. It can become confusing to the reader. In ch.1, you had a whole paragraph composed of only 1 sentense. It can be a style, like French author Proust, but most of the time, it becomes a pain to read and understand. Try to cut them a little, it'll become way more fluid to read.

Be mindful of your pronouns. Sometimes, you start using he/his for a character then use she/her later. It is not so much an issue with known characters like Marinette, but I honestly don't know about Damian's friends (except Jon). So I can't tell if Mia is a boy or a girl because of this (I would say girl because of the name but you used so much he/his with this character I'm not so sure anymore). So try to sticks with your pronouns for your character.

Othewise, it is quite a good story and I really want to read the rest of it.

Oh this is so interesting i love it can't wait for the next chapter:)

Oh this story is really interesting i hope you continue writing it

oooo how romantic love at first site can't wate to see whats next

Fair worning when i like something i egspress it in my reviews so yay (LADYBUG 12125 OUT)

This is really interesting!

Hi! I just wanted to say I love the story so far. And I’m also Native! Sadly I don’t speak my native tongue but I’m trying to learn! I love love Damienette because it’s just... bliss. But do continue, you have a fellow writer (and shipper) egging you on!