Wow, so intense. This last line makes me want more! Thank you for this, I'll definitely read more from you

I love this but it feels like there’s more here! Please make this a two shot

You’re writing is beautiful and rich and heart wrenching. Your sense of pace in the right spots adds to the drama of the story! Thank you for sharing!

Aww, I hate oneshots! This was really interesting and intense and I want o know what happens next. That was a very nice read

damn

Hot!

I freaking LOVED it! Very interesting context they’re in and it’s clear how tense their entire relationship is. The whole broken home, foster parenting thing... very well done. And their encounterso dark and hot! I could feel Rey’s conflict all the way.

Anyway, really loved your writting style and i hope to read more from you soon!

This was so intense! Great job you did there. Would love to reade more! Kudos

Wow, that was intense! Brilliant.

Please continue this! Very intense writing, both emotionally and sexually. I loved it so much and I really hope to know how their relationship progresses.

Whoa this was deeply complicated and interesting. I wish it didnt end right when he sad such an important line. I wanted to read how the rest of it played out. Im kinda hoping to convince you to write the rest of it with one last chapter. There's so much emotions that still seems to need hashing out along with the sex. Regardless this was a good read.

im not into Star Wars, like at all, but this was probably the first and best oneshot that damn near might get me to give it a chance. i enjoyed it thoroughly till the end.

much love,,

You sure like to write the bad boysand you certainly do it very wellI know Star Wars only in passing and don't connect to the characters the same way as with HP though. So especially with a one-shot that works better within a context the reader is intimately familiar with, I don't get pulled in the same way, but I definitely enjoyed it. Adam Driver is an extremely popular fan-cast for Snape so if he inspires you that might be a promising ship to explore? My favorite Snape is still the one in Self Slain Gods on Strange Altars by Scumblackentropysadly abandoned but pure delight in its bitter bite and poetry.

Wow. That was just.. Wow.

Well, damn