why is the grammar suddenly so bad? the first chapter had good grammar, but suddenly it feels I'm more reading the ideas for a story than an actual story...

that scene always makes me emotional...

1st paragraph informed me of what this story was going to be, a slog, hope those of you who can tolerate poor grammar and non sensical sentences enjoy it.

Kyoka jiro

ok no plot holes but that might just be because it's so bloody hard to read. ya need to fix your grammar my friend.

Look this has a great story concept but you need a beta reader. I find myself getting lost while trying to read because you can’t write you can spell not right. So I would recommend you make a post asking for a beta reader and have them help you rewrite the story so that it’s coherent i can and am willing to help and surely there’s more but please get a beta so it can’t at least be cohereant.

I will be updating the edited chapters soon, so just wait till I upload the latest chapter. I will at once edit them all.

I will be waiting for a new chapter. I dont care about the grammar seeing that I can still read it so please continue making this

Chapter 10: Izuku is still human and needs to breath to it is not believable that Izuku can defeat All might in this way.

[ replying to just what his son has asked her. ]

His son should be her son.

Saying "his son" you're referring that Inko is a father.

Just stop shits ass and I’m not even talking about grammar and your story kinda cool concept but execution is fucking garbage just stop like three piss poor chapters that are literally boring filler those three chapters in reality is three summaries put together to get a bigger summary that’s it fucking wack

Get a beta reader. I made it 8 chapters on before I had enough with your righting. Terrible grammar, no spell checks, run on sentences, and little to no punctuation other than periods. If you're going to write a story, read through it before you publish. This is lazy and annoying. Fix it.

Okay, if I had to give advice i would say your grammar could use a lot of improvement; that and your plot seems...scattered is the best way I can describe it.

And if izuku is so smart and have wealth why not invest on a secured pc, tablet and such to store his analysis instead of a notebook and leave it lying around accessible to anyone.

Why is that group not concerned of their analysis being compromised or accessed by villains. I mean groups like that must have certain level of anonymousity and smart villain could try to pretend not being one...