love the story

Oooohhh, things are gonna be more complicated than expected for our Bo hence four our BoLo to be reunited again thanks to this second chance.
I love that! :) but who's this Amanda huh? One among the many blondes Bo sleeps with to feel like if she still was with her Lauren or a little more as Bo remembers Amanda's name and she even went to knock on Amanda's door at 4 am. Amanda knows veru well Bo's habits to leave, after having sex. I'm intrigued by the celebration and I'd like to know alittle more about :)
I love this story! well, I love your two stories, actually. Thank you and Merci :-)

Thank you Darkhound and Shianne.

Thank you J. In its narrative form, it is definitely an extra challenge to try to tell an interesting the story.

I don't know what's worse - to be sad at life at your loss, or to have 1 day of happiness, and then experience the heartache upon losing your loved one again. It's a well written story. I like how you tell us the BoLo story in bits and pieces in a non-chronological manner.

Listen. I love this story already. Im intrigued and i can't wait for more

Hmmm interesting. Bo seems to be having problems with reality. Good thing she a friend like Lauren, I think she will need her because looks like she is the only one that really counts for her. Cant wait to see more. It takes a couple of sentences to be able to realize in which story you are. Funny heheheheh

Ir os a great story please continue it asap

Well written and interesting intrigue to start with. I have the feeling that we are not at the surprises with this new fan fiction. I like the way it's presented and I feel the experience of your preview fan fiction in the writing...keep at it!

Great chapter.

Wow, I got mixed up a little bit wondering if it was the same world but the answer was provided by Trick. I was sorry for this Bo. We all have our own reasons to hate oneself for past mistake. Seems like she will have a chance to change things. Happy for her. I think this will be interesting.

Starting to develop into an intriguing story and it will be interesting to see where you go with this.

I do however have a concern that in pursuing this story you are leaving The Price of Retribution behind and I’d rather you concentrated this story before getting to ingrossed in a new tale

Why! Why! Why the cliff hanger. Wow! It was getting good. I felt Bo's pain. Losing Lauren and her unborn child is awful and what made it even worse is that she wasn't there to protect her family. Please, don't let us wait to long for the next chapter. Thanks for continuing this new story.

Ooooohhhh! What a great and exciting chapter! I didn't expect this twist and story arc sooo I am very happy to see that, maybe, Bo will have the Redemption she's craving for in her deepest thoughts and then, Trick is offering this second chance to Bo hence to BoLo and their unborn child. I hope, Lauren's five weeks pregnancy will continue in its right chronological time :)
(As a side note: This Bo in this story is a person that we can like and understand more than the other Bo in your other story, even if I still want, wish and hope my BoLo together in "TPOR" :) )
Merci pour ces deux très bons fanfics :)

FaeMe, I want more of this story. I'm hooked!

Hi dear FaeMe, of course, I want to read more and know more of this :) C'est bien que vous ayez posté cette histoire de façon à ce que nous la voyions tout de suite sur ce site. Vous devriez le faire pour "The Price Of Retribution" :) and speaking of "TPOR" I did a mistake about Lauren. I thought she wrote a letter to Bo and I can see it's Lauren's thoughts and inner voice we read :)