I don’t know if long streams of dialogue like this are particularly engaging. Maybe try adding some description of what’s going on.

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Honestly, this seems like pretty much the exact same plot as Winx Club, except that Bloom is now Daphne and the genders of the fairies vs. heroes have been swapped. Also, are the characters with the same initials as their Winx/Specialist counterparts not each other's siblings and the children of that couple? I assumed Frank is Flora's son and Hannah is Helia's daughter—but they’re being paired up, and same with Stella/Brandon and Tecna/Timmy's counterparts. You mentioned Aisha and Nabu as the separate parents of their children—did none of the Winx couples end up having children together except Bloom and Sky? Maybe your story would be more interesting if you focused on the parts of the plot that deviate from the plot of Winx Club season One, like how all of that happened?

And also I find the line " that's it you guys can hurt my friend my family and my grandparents but nobody mess with me " to be really really funny but also maybe you should proofread your stories more.