Reviews for HARRY POTTER GOING BACK! MAKE THEM ALL PAY! |
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Guest chapter 10 . 6/4 Great update |
geekymom chapter 10 . 6/4 Fantastic chapter! |
geekymom chapter 9 . 5/19 Fantastic chapter! |
god of all chapter 8 . 5/15 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/27 the magical world does not have a religion they are a religion |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26 Why have the entire story heading in caps,but not the beggining of sentences?Pluss Im not oin to read this cause your heading shouts at me,it makes me worried you cant write properly |
geekymom chapter 8 . 4/27 Terrific chapter! |
The Geeky Folkteller chapter 1 . 4/27 stop using ! after every sentence, it's weird and misused |
Dan bond chapter 8 . 4/27 For some one who isn’t a native English speaker there is not that many misspelled words Which is really impressive |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/20 Awesome, awesome, awesome update. |
geekymom chapter 7 . 4/21 Fabulous chapter! |
Millie072 chapter 7 . 4/21 The plot thickens. Unusual twist on the Weasley family. But Mondungus, Molly should have had better taste. What is happening with fangirl Ginny? Isn't she trying to entangle Harry and save Ron,& herself? Are you planning on a Wizengamot session where Dumbles gets slapped around? The grammar is improving with each chapter. Great. Now start capitalizing first words in a sentence, and proper names. Example: the 'potter alliance' should be the 'Potter alliance'. Has there been no familial response to the Abbot, MacMillan, and Smith idiocy? No frantic letters from the families? You're getting a lot of ground covered in the story, but a hole like that could come back to bite Harry in the ass when he's least expecting. While building bridges with the Slytherins, he seems to be ignoring his other alliance members. Looking forward to chapter 8. Thanks |
tiffanythibedeau chapter 6 . 4/14 love it... |
bellapom chapter 6 . 4/11 This is an awesome story |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/8 Please update this awesome story again soon |