Hey…this is really really good! It felt like everyone was in character, and I loved that Enrique gave Elena a good talking to, that was very satisfying. This is almost exactly how I imagined it!

I love this. It's nice to know someone also blames Imelda for some of Miguel's suffering, and it was cool how Enrique stood up to his mother like that. Beautiful work :)

That was a good story. I have always wanted to see a story about what was going on in the living family while Miguel was at the land of the dead.

Out of all of the living family members, Miguel's Parents were my favorite. The seemed to be more reasonable and they did feel terrible for making their son upset.

I'm glad that Enrique was able to stand up to his Mother and have her think about what she did, even if she wouldn't accept it automatically.

I did notice something though, Franco wasn't even seen during the confrontation while the one Aunt (who I don't know if it's Gloria or Carmen) came the heck out of no where during that scene.

Good idea about Enrique's thoughts of what happened to Hector.

Anyway, good story.