Thanks for sharing.

Well I loved how this turned out! Good job.

I was expecting a long and drawn out fight. I’m glad they squashed Caius but worried for his retribution, I know it will involve Bella.

It’s happening fast.

The Calabreses will never get to their end game without taking out the Cullen-Masen family.

:)

I wonder if Seth will show back up.

Seth seems pissed. Is it because of the mafia connection or does he have a crush?

Very nice first date

sweet

Story sounds good so far. Looking forward to reading it.
I just would have liked more clarification on Bella’s condition in the first chapter. Bella has partial use of legs? It bella had no feeling in her legs but also used wheelchair when she had pain.

Was excited to start reading this story, a little disappointed when I read about the handicap. I always love a badass Bella to go with mobward. I also didn't understand the injury balls sustained. If Bella has no feeling in her legs than how is she able to use arm braces? She can still stand on legs? Or does she just drag them everywhere?

I've read alot of much worse spelling stories on here and other sites. Yours are not so bad don't let people get to you great story

really like this story

The snakes freak me out, but they are very effective! Maybe a big giant python will smallow Caius whole!