Reviews for Wishes For the Divine
bootlegwat chapter 2 . 4/15
Good fic, hoping for more. Also would having an Ahamkara here if the info got outside Gensokyo would it attract guardians and alike?
James Birdsong chapter 2 . 2/11
Good two chapters
gold crown dragon chapter 2 . 2/11
Even when young Ahamkara are filled with claws,lies,tooths and hunger for desire.
Beware o writer mine, that beast could grow beyond what we think of.
Diluation chapter 1 . 2/2
Interesting start... so are we going to have a Ahamkara Youkai as the protagonist here? Why the name choice 'Ladon', and who was the Ahamkara that died(or would you rather leave it some random one)?

I would mainly like answers on the name choice here. Ahamkara names tend to mean actions instead of a character in the Greek mythology. For instance, Riven means 'split apart', and Huginn means 'memory'. One is also a term for an Irish dog, but still...

You got a good story going here. Some grammar errors, but nothing that breaks immersion. If you need help with Destiny lore, that is something I could do, but I myself had just been reading off of the Touhou wiki as well, so I don't know much in that area. Just enough to know Touhou could be dark if someone wanted it to be(Kappa's favorite food is da butt my dudes!).
Unknown chapter 1 . 1/16
If planning of continuing this story, try to make Destiny as in a fair ground as possible. I know they're mostly focused on the Solar System from a non-player's point of view, but reading on the lore of the franchise (with two recently added Lore books from Shadowkeep and Season of Dawn) is very much differently all together.

Still Vague about the Power of The Light or the Darkness there on that Lore book and how it connects with all other power forces and beings within the Flower Game. A bit nervous when going toe to toe like this Anime is What I'm cautious when crossing to This one. Just saying.
Unknown chapter 1 . 1/16
Towards the this first user: of course the Light and the Traveler knows such beings from touhou, probably some advantage for the Guardians and their allies around the Destiny universe. Also it's 'fate', like 'Guardians make their own fate' old line from VOG? Though I'll dismiss it as just a type-error. Just in case you know.
Unknown-06 chapter 1 . 1/16
Have you read the entirety of the Unveiling yet? Try this out before continuing with this book. Just to have some fair ground on both sides...
TheRealCactoos chapter 1 . 1/17
“And then [she] raised Divinity.”

Something something Garden of Salvation lore is interesting and would be cool in this 2hu fic
Kamencolin chapter 1 . 1/17
Alright this looks really interesting
rafaelrizo98 chapter 1 . 1/16
I forget to say make the Male titan as a protector and peace keeper, and make the guardian immune most of the spell card for example changing faith and stopping time.
make the titan can take less damage from danmaku and make him feel pain as like a slap or a weak punch form the danmaku.
rafaelrizo98 chapter 1 . 1/16
I want a Male titan and his ghost with a ghost giving by the speaker and the traveler know the land of Gensokyo exist and have new guardian in the land of Gensokyo.
remember the ghost of destiny have not have rules what type of specie can be a guardian, you can make a a fairy to be a guardian XD or have a one Alice doll because a guardian and be a hunter because she can make her own decision and her own faith. hope make in to the story or give you a plan.