while I did notice the flaws the story in my opinion is awesome. I really hoping to know what the main reason is tho

I have to say you got me hooked on this fanfic. For one I love you you make the story flow smoothly, sure some times I feel like you may have a typo here or there but still you actually are taking time to develop the character and I appreciate that you are doing in the right way and not forcing too much at the reader all at once but also taking new looks at the story to keep my attention. I look foe to you future work

J'espère qu'il ne pardonnera pas a ses parents.

Its alright to take a break just keep it up really good story

it's not one piece crossover, more like OOC and SI/OC. zoro been long dead even before waring era, pirate was a tale of old.

One piece shizuka or naruto shizuka?

i look forward to the changes and the new chapter !

Good luck

Good luck with your writing, stay safe

Tsunade no Tusande.

Following canon so closely is starting to ruin this fic. All the fights are boring, and Naruto clearly has knowledge he shouldn't. Having the MC always come out on top in every situation is boring as hell. How does he know where zabuza's hide out is? How does he know gato will betray him? Why is he easily able to make zabuza retreat when it takes him all of five seconds to capture yugao? Either yugao is seriously weak or Naruto is way OP; neither make for an interesting story.
I still enjoy the premise, but hopefully things become more natural in later chapters.

I thought that this chapter would reveal Naruto's little secret.

Need more

I like the story so far, it's better now that the whole family drama isn't highlighted as often.

The shizuka naruto paring also works, as well as the zoro skillset

Fuck why is every neglect fic exactly like this with the photo album, realisations and then the eventual forgiveness bs