Oh my goodness, what a chapter! Your creativity in worldbuilding is really shining through - those tentacles! That entrance! Coming from Hungry Moon, your pacing is so tantalising in this sequel. I did not expect Hans to pop up. Doubly keen to read on!

What an end! I live and breathe by cliffhangers
I was going to comment on each chapter but I figured I could go all the way to the end and give my global thoughts!
Landon: what a chad! Everything from his demeanor and his dialogue oozes personality, he is up there with Cynthia as my favorite character! I'm kinda rooting for him as much as I am for Drake&Elsa. Speaking of which...
The 'training scene' was cute and had me on board with them two, I was so disappointed Elsa decided not to pursue anything. Poor Drake, he's taking it like a champ. But I understand where Elsa's coming from. And hey, she just took a contract with a Demon to save his hide, so wink wink!
You made me hate Hans even more than I already did before, and I love it! What a brat. Also, screw Dirgelaff.
Your character interactions had me chuckling - if not outright laughing - many times so props to you for that!
You also had some badass fight scenes to complete the trick!
Thank you for sharing this and good luck for the sequel! Excited to see what's coming!

The black worms continue to make me uncomfortable and you did such a good job depicting Elsa's helplessness. And what a cool riddle and invitation! Very impressed that you came up with that. Looks like our story begins in earnest now.

What, I don't get to see Landon dragging Hans and Dirgelaff down to the deepest Pit of Hell? Aw, man!

This was a great story in any case. I really hope in the future you'll get back to it and give it the ending it deserves. In the mean time relax, clear your mind and enjoy your family!

Interesting beginning! I liked the $interactions between Anna and Kristoff, seldom do we have their wholesomeness as a couple portrayed in this way.
And who's this Dirgelaff fella? I sense some trouble coming because of the guy, and it's still a good thing!

Oh, crap, Drake is 'sick', Hans will get his army, everything is going off the rails, but the story is more exciting than ever!

I wonder who poisoned Arabella's trident: Hans or Dirgelaff.

I loved to see Landon being so shady here. Don't get me wrong, he's a good ally in the Titans stories, but I like when he's an anti-villain. He killed the kraken and poisoned Arendelle, something that Elsa, Anna and Kristoff will definitely not forget, no matter his intentions. And making a deal for Elsa's soul, wow, I wasn't expecting for that! At first I thought that Landon was just being a horny demon and wanted to take Elsa for himself, but maybe he just wants to make sure Elsa can't use herself the ring of Solomon against him when she gets it from Hans.

I wonder why Landon couldn't say anything before, but now he was able to speak freely about Hans plans.

What a start! Already I'm reminded of the humour I so enjoyed in Hungry Moon. Olaf's boy talk moment was hilarious! And what an end to the first chapter. You strung us along with fluffy trivialities and then boom, drama!

Whoa lots of plot twists going on. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Hahaha! Again you remind me why I love Landon so much! Organized chaos, indeed!

Can't wait to see how you're going to wrap this up. I'm turning several possibilities in my head but I know you have a surprise or two for us up your sleeve!

That last part though. Drake’s gotta be PISSED about that.

Man, you just don't mess with Landon's attire. It makes him... angry.

Great chapter. Things are moving towards a resolution, it seems, but I bet there's still a lot of stuff about to happen. Eagerly awaiting the next one!

Ah, a "triple" cross from Landon. I wouldn't expect anything less from him though. I loved to see Raptor back.
Elsa's request in case her champion wins was very fitting. Now that they figured out what was wrong with the fjord, it makes sense that a person like her would ask for the games to end.
I liked the Ignis Rexia tradition. I wonder what Drake is up to, he must have had a reason to ask for it.
"So my power is channeled from a place where everything has turned without moving" I'm very curious to see what this means.

Fantastic chapter! That was a plot twist with Landon! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you're staying safe :)

You’re really good at descriptions, especially that part when the lignid rexia starts.

Ugh. Landon is, as usual, playing his own game. Drake is right not to trust him but what else could they do?

Let's hope Landon's purposes will remain in line with the needs of the rest. We'll see soon enough, I hope...