| Reviews for Bewitched |
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   Jerome's Doll chapter 15 . 7/30 Love this ️️️ |
| IAAB chapter 10 . 7/28 This is the best way I can respond to this review, hopefully you see it. In the story Edward never told his family what he and Anita spoke about in the hospital since they agreed the speak more about it Monday, I should’ve elaborated that in the story that he wouldn’t tell his family about her until after him and Anita talked. Sometimes I don’t explain certain details just because I forget to put them. So when Anita does confront the group on Monday, Edward is the only one that knows she’s not human and that she knows their secret, but he is surprised to find out that Anita is being hunted by the nomads; he helps her hide this from Jasper because he didn’t want Jasper to lose his shit like last time. There is a scene I forgot to complete at the end of Jasper’s POV where it eludes to Esme having an idea about what Anita could be after the accident, but, like I said, I did forget about that scene and it doesn’t do anything for the story so when I realized it, I just left it out entirely. I might delete that part from the story tbh because it ends so abruptly. Anyways, I hope I helped clear up the confusion. I know it gets confusing because I say Cullens and clumps them all together, even when I’m only referring to some of them, I’ll make sure to be more specific in the future. |
| 3moos chapter 11 . 7/28 What I don't understand is why Jasper and the others do like Anita doesn't know what the Cullen are. Because a few chapters before when Anita and Edward meet in the hospital, she call Edward a bloodsucker and present herself as supernatural or did you forget about it when you wrote this chapter? |
| Mirabitur chapter 15 . 7/28 i love this story so much! her voice for her dialogue is so clear i can almost hear her speaking in my head- and it's nice to see my spanish knowledge being put to use :P I can't wait to read more! |
| Mirabitur chapter 5 . 7/27 awe, poor jaz... |
| A.Himawari chapter 15 . 7/27 Stronk independent woman learning to open up, rely on others. Character building at its finest. |
| Vega-Pandora chapter 14 . 7/21 Honestly, I am in LOVE with this book. It's fucking amazing and so damn well written. It's currently 07:52 in the morning and I stayed up all night reading this. Can't wait to see what happens next! Brielle x |
| Kazaqui chapter 14 . 7/21 I love the bond Anita has qith her brother and I'm glad her and Bella are becoming closer. I'm interested to know more about her dream. |
| Babyi.G chapter 13 . 7/17 I love this story so much it’s great |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/9 Love thisssssss oml |
| Kazaqui chapter 13 . 6/28 Great chapter :) Could definitely relate to her feelings switching sonfast when he stayed at the end. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/28 Love love love love thisss ️ |
| ichigostrawberry00 chapter 13 . 6/27 AHHHHHHHHHHHH! Cliffhangers, WHY? I'm dying right here and want to see more of the inside of Jaspers' head. LOL, and what Rose is thinking. Could this get any cuter? |
| chellekathrynnn chapter 5 . 6/22 This story screams gen Z. You must be a Zoomer. |
| Kazaqui chapter 12 . 6/21 Realley enjoyed this chapter. Excited for the next one :) |
