Reviews for The Swordmaster of Ordelia
nam2324 chapter 37 . 6/15
Rhea: murder is the best solution
Seteth:well yes but still too much is too much(Seteth has less of those tendencies but perhaps it s even worse because when he does it's because of a rational belief it is the best thig to do)

Their paternalism show and i love it but maybe they are a bit to aware of the humans short life considering their viewpoint.

Though she is right about linhart:the smartest one are the oe who cause the most problem

Isn't it a bit sinful to use lust to charm people?I guess all is fair if it's for the goddess

Small typo"rhea aske" in the dialogue about dorothea

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Tovath chapter 37 . 6/1
I so want to punch Rhea right now. I hope that Lysithea turns down that offer.
Lazruth chapter 37 . 5/31
A short chapter, but a needed one. We get to see that Seteth does have a level head and is indeed a peaceful man, while Rhea...

Well, there was a reason i grew to despise her even before her reveal, and you showed that you understand who and what Rhea is and how/why she acts like she does. Hater her or not, I have to admit that.
Aylatha chapter 36 . 5/13
You can't shoot anything other than arrows from a bow because of physics. Flaming arrows would work, but torches, knives and spears are totally out of the question. Even if someone managed to nock them to a string, they wouldn't fly like intended. If you wanted to shoot something akin to a spear, you'd need a catapult. And the methods for throwing spears or knives are very different from archery. It would have made more sense for Bernadetta to just throw a spear instead. Or use it in close combat, if that is a skill she has in this story. And even if she didn't, it would still be better than trying to defend herself with a bow.
Aylatha chapter 16 . 5/12
You tend to overuse the word "would" in places where it shouldn't be used. Just so you know.
northernlion196 chapter 36 . 5/5
Yay girl bonding over cake!

(I dont have my ship glasses on, what do you mean?)
agarfinkel chapter 33 . 4/19
The whole thing Marianne getting mad at Dimitri for injuring a horse could make for an interesting idea later on in the story if you decide to have the story follow the game. Here's the idea: during the war phase, right after the three way battle between Edelgard, Dimitri, and Claude's forces, Marianne sees Dimitri about to chase after Edelgard as she is retreating and she and her horse step in front of him in order to stop him. Dimitri, still consumed by rage, attacks Marianne for being in his way and injures her horse, after which a really angry Marianne proceeds to brutally attack Dimitri for almost killing her horse, only to be stopped from killing him by Byleth, Claude, Lysithea, Hilda, and Dedue.
Guest chapter 35 . 4/7
Felix and the woes of being a dense harem protagonist LMAO. RIP Felix, you will be missed.

Meanwhile underground, everything that could be going wrong is going wrong.
NepShrimpz chapter 35 . 4/7
Felix and the faboulos 15s XD
nam2324 chapter 35 . 4/5
Ah yes Felix and his loli's harem

That abyss chapter in abyss could be resumed by "when do they stop"

Unatural of lysithea to open up like that but i guess it s pointless to try and keep an open secret like that.
Sonikah chapter 35 . 4/4
I really like how the first half of this chapter was basically a harem anime for Felix.
prietar chapter 35 . 4/4
felix and his a and a supports with almost every girl its really funny and i like his harem xd
Guest chapter 34 . 4/1
I wonder if the ashen wolves and the events that happen on the DLC would matter? Sure it wouldn't be Lysithea eccentric but it would be nice development for Byleth.
Ganunga chapter 33 . 4/1
I had a bit of a laugh at this one, I could see Hubert lashing out at Sylvain for his shall we say "brand of humor". Though I'd imagine he would be far more subtle about it than slinging explosives in front of several major witnesses.

I'm mainly posting to address something Sylvain said. You do realize you just had him jokingly recommend giving MARIANNE a knife right? You know, the character who spends much of her time clearly depressed? The one who admits in her supports that she prayed for her own death pre-timeskip? Daily? She says it in her A-support with Byleth.

I get that it's a potshot about the knife incident but this perhaps was in poor taste considering circumstance, I was surprised everyone in the room didn't shot the guy a glare at the very least. His comment WAS pretty beyond-the-pale considering who he was talking about.
nam2324 chapter 34 . 4/2
Like a wise man said, the best flexes are the one that are not intentional
Despite anything he might say, hubert is a "love striken fool"
While Everyone s favorite tsundere goes off to grind,byleth is ...enjoying his stay in the basement.
Nice chapter as always
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