Very dark story
Keep up the good work

If for some reason olga and welf fought. Then olga uses her magecraft on welf and he uses will o' wisp on her. What would happen?

Pretty good!

I'm actually looking forward to when Avenger and that Prum meet again.

Did Avenger ever try to make a Falna on someone that didn't already belong to another god?

I think that Chaldea section should have been INFRONT of the Author's Q&A section. Otherwise it might be skipped over & it looked so good to!

Hey! Isn't it careless and out of character to do such an Ice attack when there was a fellow fighter within range of the attack and not ONLY the monster?

Great chapter!

Olga-Marie... I get that she a kid here, but I don't get why she thinks "reverse-side possible, other world impossible."

So unlike in cannon, THIS Olga-Marie doesn't have cursed circuits that make it impossible for her to be a Master or Rayshift?

Is the recent revelations in Lostbelt 5 going to effect anything? Perhaps Angra acknowledging it?

If Olga has Chaldea Command Spells, can’t she use one to drop an orbital strike like the one from el melloi case files? She also has runes, gandr, and typical magus stuff like bounded fields, which don’t really exist in Danmachi outside what the Gods can do with their Arcanum.

Cool story, really like the way Olga has no idea Avenger is murdering and threatening a lot of people behind her back to get her cool stuff. Assuming Olga’s Command Spells are typical Chaldea ones (regenerate over a day), will Olga cannibalize a CS to call in an orbital strike like in el melloi case files?

Nooo a tener q esperar

I'm tired of all the Emiya Shirou fanfics, he's a great character, but give other characters a chance, there's plenty of great characters in Fate, why only use one?
That's why when i saw your fanfic, i clicked on it immediately, and it did not disappoint.

A question avenger, who would win between you and Rey (Star wars)?

Now hear me out here but how bout instead of a servant Chaldea send Wodime he could be a mentor to Marie since he was taught the Animusphere magecraft. And if the latest Lostbelt anything to go by he can be just as strong as a servant if not much more so. Proceed to have flashback of his fight at the end of Olympus.

Also Question we know magecraft becomes much stronger in the age of the gods and depending on circumstances can even make one rival a literal god. So why doesn't Marie seem any stronger now. Even if she a kids she should be getting something.

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