Ah, very interesting! I did wish we got a tad more out of Riza's relationship with her dad, and her meeting with Roy was nice, too. I also like the idea that he tried to transmute her mom, since his poor health could easily be explained by Truth taking something from him.

This is better. A nice look into Riza's life. I think the ending would be more interesting if it ended with Riza being freed from the secrets of flame alchemy