Reviews for Ara Ara
Guest chapter 14 . 7/8
Loved it!
The nigster chapter 14 . 7/6
nice
NazgulBelserion chapter 8 . 7/3
Ugh I always found those ears so cringy couldn't he get a better costume
Tojiro Murakami chapter 14 . 6/4
Okay, when I first saw this fic. I went straight to the reviews. I hesitated on whether I should read it or not due to the number of negative comments I read, however, having already read many of your other stories before, I decided to go through with it and verify it for myself. You are a very talented writer and you certainly know how to capture the main aspects of a character's personality, while also adding your own spin to it, but I will admit that there was some stuff lacking here and other things I feel could have been corrected. Your character Moe, from what I can tell from a quick google search is a real character, and perhaps it isn't an option on here yet, but I would reccomend to switch it to her name if the option is available, instead of the OC category that you chose. The plot also went from slow to fast in terms of building the plot, but I can understand why you might have done that. I have written some fics myself, and sometimes it can get difficult to continue writing a story when you're no longer interested in writing it. Though, I do feel that this fic had far more potential than how you went about quickly finishing it. Avoiding fight scenes is certainly understandable, but the anime series is really big on fighting, so it was hard to kind of stomach how it ended, since it felt like you just gave up on the original plot mid story and solely started focusing on the romance aspect. The smut is really good, and I'm usually big on romantic smut like how you tend to write them, but I would have liked to see them have children at least, and perhaps even show a glimpse of them being a popular hero team or something to get a more clearer idea of their current situation and not just a general idea. All in all, I don't regret reading your fic and I do love your other stories quite a bit. I do hope you focus more on not rushing your stories in the future however, because you certainly have the talent for writing... unlike some others on here who have terrible ideas, spelling, and grammar. Being an avid fanfic reader has exposed me to a ton of crap stories, and I'm just glad that there are writers like you on here making a worthwhile effort to counterbalance the bad stuff. So, thanks for writing this unique story, and I hope I can continue to see some more from you. Also, the negative review you received were crap. Those people probably can't even write anything worthwhile, so I wouldn't take their words to heart. You're essentially doing all this for free, so they can suck it, lol.
PinguGod chapter 1 . 5/28
What about uraraka?
vparadox12122000 chapter 5 . 5/21
...lol that set up at the end XD
beingwithu chapter 14 . 5/4
T1 vibes
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 14 . 4/24
Fun
Naruto72 chapter 14 . 4/22
I'm sad to see it end, but I enjoyed the story. I hope you decide to write another story with this pairing
MisfitWatcher chapter 14 . 4/21
IMO That was the perfect ending. And I'm definitely stealing that last conversation.
enderdez45 chapter 14 . 4/21
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T-B-R chapter 14 . 4/20
nice ending to a good story
Alulain P chapter 14 . 4/20
Thanx for a great story!
te.nellis chapter 14 . 4/20
Epic ty. Nice end
LoveGlutton chapter 14 . 4/19
Looking forward to the next one
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