Reviews for In This Broad Universe
StirFriedSammi chapter 24 . 7/1
Your FOP stories are always a joy to read. I’ve genuinely been looking forward to each chapter update over the past few months. If you write any more i’ll definitely be waiting!
Piperamitt chapter 24 . 7/1
I think it's my first time reviewing one of your stories even tho I read all of your FOP fanfics as soon as they came out...
I have always been a fan, I love the way you write and I have recommended your fanfics more than once (I don't think even one of them read them because I'm stuck in a country with people who don't read FOP fanfiction but I still tried)
I kinda like the way you write Cosmo, it feels for the most part like him and I know from experience how hard it is to keep Cosmo in character while trying to write a less comical story.
It didn't really bother me the way you wrote Timmy Turner's parents I actually kinda liked the way you wrote them
SPOILER alert if you haven't yet read the end of chapter 21
And I felt really bad when Timmy's dad died I think I had cried but I really don't remember it, it happened 3 weeks ago and a lot has happened since then.
I liked the way you took it slowly and I liked the way you showed us Cosmo and Wanda love towards Timmy, I really love stories that show us a lot more about their relationship.
I remember that at the beginning of the story before even Cosmo and Wanda knew Timmy was a half-fairy when Wanda went to Doctor Studwell and he thought she was one of those bad fairies that used to do stuff to their godchildren and sell it to the pixies (I really struggled to explain this I hope I did a good job) I remember me being so excited and how badly I just wanted to talk to someone about the story because I had a lot on my mind and how I was so excited when I got the email message that a new chapter came out and how I dropped everything I was doing just to read the next chapter and discover what was the aftermath of that last chapter.
I remember feeling like that all through the story and I remember when there was that long break and how I just hoped the next chapter will come out, I remember how happy I was when it finally came out.
Now time to talk about the last chapter and how I felt about it.
I really enjoyed the way you wrote the last chapter, even tho we didn't know some of the people and what was happening at the beginning you wrote it in a way that showed us that the characters we all knew from the story really lived there and those things that were happening at the beginning of the chapter we're normal everyday life for them.
I also liked the way you explained it for us, in the end, I thought it was really creative, explaining everything that happened in this chapter up to that point using Timmy recording himself using some old recording tool that used to belong to his father.
I also really liked the way you showed us Wanda 10 years in the future it really fits her to go and be a professor at the academy I also liked the line that said Wanda wasn't been very subtle about her wanting Timmy's mom to merry Max I felt like it something Wanda will do.
I also hope now that Wanda and Cosmo live in fairy world they sometimes go to visit their parents, I really want to know how Mama Cosma and Big Daddy felt about Timmy now that he is sorta their grandson, but that just me and my obsession to Wanda's family and wanting to see how Mama Cosma now feel when the kid who ruined her plan to break Cosmo and Wanda apart a few times is now her grandson.
I really hope you will continue writing FOP fanfiction and bye until the next time I will finally feel brave enough to review again.
(I hope I didn't have a lot of grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes while writing this I have tried my best to limit them as much as possible)
amitt
batchat1612 chapter 24 . 7/1
looking forward to your new stories:)
swalublue chapter 23 . 6/26
So this is a series. Interesting start to the first act of a story.
User724 chapter 16 . 6/10
Getting major Spectra vibes from this.
batchat1612 chapter 20 . 6/7
Just love this
Cyan Quartz chapter 10 . 4/25
Loving the story so far!
Curse Of Kings chapter 1 . 4/22
Does Chloe appear in this story?
Cyan Quartz chapter 5 . 4/21
Yeah... I remember how frustrating it felt as a child, to be dismissed and called a liar by adults. Happened alot. I try not to forget that sort of thing when it comes to my nephews.
You really captured the feeling here, heh.
Nicole chapter 14 . 4/11
Omg Foop is so cute :’3 I love how he was trying to help 3
socram1 chapter 9 . 3/4
I loved the new chapter
Timmy will be going crazy if someone doesn't start talking about what's going on
ChronoTriggerMan chapter 7 . 2/27
I just finished "Fightin' Flightless", and now I'm curious if Brooke and/or Sapphire are gonna show up in this story. Keep on the great work, your stories are hella' good!
DarthLink22 chapter 5 . 1/19
Wow... I've come across a gem. I really feel Timmy's sense of misery. I felt bad for him. I love Cosmo and Wanda taking care of him. Can't wait for more.
STLBluesFan67 chapter 4 . 1/11
That magic that Timmy performed...it almost looked like a Patronus Charm from the “Wizarding World of Harry Potter” series...or was it just some very powerful defense spell?
socram1 chapter 3 . 1/8
I really enjoyed the story I hope you post the 4 chapter soon