Reviews for Altered |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. Love it. This gave me the closure the movie did not. Absolutely phenomenal writing and plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't even know where to begin...this story is fucking gorgeous and amazing! I LOVE it! It's so well written with new and interesting characters like Jek-aghh he still melts my heart-and Tsaro-LOVE her-and still has all of that Reylo amazing fluff that we all love. I cannot wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...no words... literally...unfuckingbelivably amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is intense and I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cutecutecutecutecutecute and intense angst but with soothing fluff afterwards! YES. I LIVE for this stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() DAMN. Girl you are an amazing writer! I was not expecting Voe to come back at all! I know she died in the comic, so that's probably why, but I'm fine with this, too! and yay! Jek to the rescue! I can't with this kid he's adorable |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh...omg. you're writing is fucking amazing. Reading Jek was heartbreaking, and it ripped out my heart a little more when you mentioned Voe. I've seen her from the Kylo Ren comics, and it just hit me full force and gave me a really good visualization. Really well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AGH. That moment at the very end. SO FUCKING SWEET OMG |
![]() ![]() ![]() cutecutecutecutecute! I love that they both comfort each other in their bad dreams too |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahahahaha the fact that ben has a favorite swear word makes me so happy and idek why XDDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() wuhdfsdjckxsakdjcmx ,msakjwedsmc,xlkjwcxlk,xc.!1 YES YES YES YES YES. THIS WAS EVERYTHING! so sweet, so fluffy, so soft, they're so cute omg. Also, good continuity thing! In Episode 1, Phantom Menace, Qui-Gon mentions the only other place he'd seen podracing was on Malastare, so nice attention to detail! Also, was it your intention to make the kiss at the beginning like Anakin and Padme's first kiss in Episode 2? If so, great job! I LOVED this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING writing this chapter. Seriously. I cannot praise this enough. Tsaro getting hurt made my heart break little and the cuteness and awkwardness and shyness between these two is so adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I REALLY liked the dream Rey had. It felt very in tune with both of their fears and felt very real. And them comforting each other afterward was very sweet :D |
![]() ![]() This was amazing. Way better than what Disney did. i couldn't stop reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES. Kiss was so sweet and amazing! I loved it! |