Reviews for Maelstrom Effect Book 2: Shadows of Crimson
Leaf Ranger chapter 4 . 9/20
So...Emily has regrouped with garrus early, so it'll be interesting to see how that impacts Naruto going to recruit Archangel. Naruto is up and it seems Kyuubi is an asari or something in this world. And that one scientist dude is working for the Alliance AND the Shadow Broker, while Joker is going to be a spy for the Alliance. Wow. o.O

Great work so far. good chapter. Keep it up!
Vanipon chapter 4 . 9/19
I can just see Emily hugging the living they lights out of Naruto before smashing his head into the floor for getting him self killed... though I thing that's more up to Sakura's department. And I can see Naruto tearing down almost every merc and gang of Omega when he see that prosthetic arm of Emily and she tells him what happened.

Once Tali see Naruto as well I can see her hugging him as well. Perhaps Morin Solus could help Emily with a better arm. Could Samara have been the one to teach Naruto the Justcar way of hand to hand combat?

So many thing to imagine and think while waiting for the next chapter, keep it up the good work
Jebest4781 chapter 4 . 9/18
this looked quite good
Guest chapter 4 . 9/17
What is this mysterious blood that was given to Naruto!? And love how the Alliance just gained the Mother Lose of Prothean Tech!
Shadow chapter 4 . 9/17
loved it! Amazing chapter!
Checkmate28 chapter 4 . 9/17
wonderful work always enjoy seeing new chapters from your fics
demonzone2571 chapter 4 . 9/17
Mass Effect 1: a decent beginning
Mass Effect 2: the best of the trilogy
Mass Effect 3: a subpar ending with a lot thrown into it
Vanipon chapter 3 . 9/10
Nice story, and I liked it very much. Though I'm hopping that Naruto can find his mother when he wake up on that Cerberus star base. And would it be possible that with Tali and Liara's help he not only finds her but discover that both Miranda and Oriana are his half sister. I ask this because it could be very well related. the same clear blue eyes, the amazing biotic abilities, and in case of Miranda's story, she could've been lied to, and if the man she think of her father is such geneticist, what's to stop him and Cerberus to extract Kushina's egg and do an in vitro fertilization on her?

Will you make Emily and Naruto face off on Horizon or will she be with Vega and save his sorry ass? Tough Tali and Garrus Could give Emily the heads up, and since Garrus would stick together with Naruto he could easy her worries by sending periodic reports and vids to show her that even though Naruto is using Cerberus funded equipment he isn't Cerberus
smilix chapter 3 . 7/9
you should had ashley as naruto paring or at least have her join paring
Leaf Ranger chapter 3 . 7/6
I gotta admit, this chapter felt really dry and a bit hard to read. Until near the end. Then it sort of turned bad...you cut off Emily's arm? Why? Gahhhh, that was just messed up. x.x

still, not a bad chapter, just...a bit hard to get through SOrry. x.x

Keep up the good work!
KingRyu chapter 3 . 7/6
How long till you bring naruto back to life cause I think I’m just going to skip the Shepard chronicles
Jebest4781 chapter 3 . 7/5
this was quite enjoyable
Shadow chapter 2 . 6/9
looking forward to the next chapter!
Leaf Ranger chapter 2 . 6/6
HUh, interesting so far. very interesting. So Naruto 'died', and Emily is now working with garrus as they both are Spectre candidates, while hitting Cerberus. This should prove interesting down the line when Naruto comes back (if it's Cerberus that revives him).

One thing to note? I'm pretty sure Miranda's accent is Australian, not English. because her voice actress is suppose to be Australian, or something.
Jameslw chapter 2 . 6/5
Great story please continue
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