pls continue

Fun:-)

Make blood dragon emperor and contract with a sucubuss again please oh and can we get a flashback of what happens while issei is getting raped by Succubus and can we get a torture scene with issei hurting Lileith and tommamo

good story
but the one thing I hate about neo's pairing story is that everyone ignores the fact that neo is short as hell, she is 4'9 in high heels and Jaune is 6'0 so neo cant push her tits into Jaune chest she can only push them into his stomach she also cant push her ass into his dick because she is too short she would have to be on her tiptoes to do it

While I feel like Neo got way too into Jaune there after just meeting him a minute ago, I will say that you did good making the scene steamy and dangerous. Also, what the hell Junior? You don’t give a bro a Strawberry Sunrise on the house, you give him a beer or a real drink. Or considering it’s Jaune, at least a Rum and Coke.

A pairing with all three of those girls would have been interesting

Oooh, I’m liking the sexual tension you’ve built up. Excited to see how Jaune goes about explaining the hicky and if he decided to keep the date a secret or not

Good job on the start. Why not all three. Oh jaune you lucky bastard

I really like your characterizations and look forward to where this may go, but I have to critique your paragraph lengths in the second half. They become fairly large and are hard to read without breaks between sections.

good stuff, just space the text a bit and you're perfect

Best Christmas present ever

You're sending him down a very dangerous rabbit hole, you know that, right?

Awsome start I was half expecting a competitive anime morsome type relationship but Neo is a sweet choice I do hope you eventually do one with the twins. I like your writing style can’t wate for whatever you do next.

Liking the story so far, good work.

Great work! Can you do all three girls at the same time?

Las chicas estarán celosas, pero el helado napolitano es el favorito del caballero.