Yeah, this is a favourite!

Ahh! Such a nice chapter. Usually authors don't do the proposal this well.

That was a fun, sweet, and really enjoyable story.

I liked the plot, though I'm sad that Harry had to go through such a bad experience with Ginny.

Gabrielle was awesome, and I loved the way that the relationship developed. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Very sweet and cute.

Enjoyable story

Weird pacing

Didn't really focus on Christmas or 12 days song or gifts

I will say this has made me start to look for more Harry x Gabbie

This is the best chapter so far. It just flowed like honey.

I don't really get why Titus gets so much screen time in this story.

Is that your self insert?

Man that part where she had to convince him she's not a kid anymore was perfect.

I don't really understand why there's such a massive time jump between chapters in universe.

Well, the unease from the first chapter turned into a bat to the head in this.

While I understand what you were trying to do, I think of you reversed almost every event in this chapter, it would have come off more naturally. His friend is worried about hearing rumors of unfaithfulness. Harry finding drugs around. Ron noticing the distance.

I mean, having it end funding her in bed with another dude makes sense.

This is a wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Post Hogwarts Harry/Gabrielle has become a favorite of mine and there are so few good ones. Character’s behaviorS were believable and made sense. Thank you for sharing.

Quidditch is really boring to read. This and Vitam Paramus are far too similar in content for this to be all that enjoyable. Probably made worse because I found Vitam Paramus overly long and boring with all its drama.

I don't know how I missed this for so long, because I love this pairing, and I especially love your writing.

Been catching up on updates since I’ve been busy the last few months, can’t believe I missed out on 3 chapters of this beautiful piece of work the entire time. Amazing work, got me feeling all happy tbh, can’t wait for the next chapter! Also hope you’re staying safe with everything that’s going on right now!

This is a nice romantic short story.

The first two chapters are very strong. After that it gets a bit crap imo.
The conflict with Ginny goes from interesting to overblown and bashy. The relationship between Gab and Harry goes from cute to overblown and annoying. The plot device of her working at an Orchestra and needing a place to rent is more than a little absurd for a Witch. She can teleport.

But, I reiterate, the first two chapters are great.

Another great ff! I always expect a really beautiful piece of writing when I start one of your stories and certainly you've made it again.

Really such a lovely story. And it's a lot merrier than vitam paramus, which I loved but always makes me feel a bit down for Gabrielle.

Cheers!