Reviews for Dragon Ball: A Tale Of Two Brothers
Kitsune chapter 1 . 5/30
It looks like Raditz and Kakarot will be real puzzle masters in the future. XD
I think it's great that you included the thing with the rock-paper-scissors game.
GJH 28 chapter 4 . 5/18
Love it personally hope Raditz gets Bulma but also cant wait to see where this goes
Sunshine Spray chapter 3 . 4/30
I let out the ugliest laugh when the chapter started with them eating pork. XD I never did like Oolong. Great job so far! I’m looking forward to more.
KookieMan20 chapter 3 . 4/12
You made them eat Oolong. How could you
I.C.2014 chapter 3 . 2/20
I like the story, I’m just a little upset that they ate Oolong.
Zurkon128 chapter 3 . 2/16
Okay wtf, they ATE Oolong?! I still enjoy the story but jeez, that's dark. Also what's with the weird font?
Ssj shadow chapter 2 . 2/6
Nice start but does raditz and goku knew about freiza and is turles going to be with nappa and vegeta and is he going to be there cousin and can you please give the characters power level s please update soon man
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2
pretty crappy
Zurkon128 chapter 1 . 12/24/2019
Interesting. Also like how when you initially focused on Goku, you described things such as the car from his point of view. All in all a nice family story in time for the holidays, however I do think the profanity from Raditz was a bit unnecessary and didn't fit the overall tone. Still, I hope to see more.
Kirbylover99 chapter 1 . 12/24/2019
Interesting, hope to see this continued
ToddJ27 chapter 1 . 12/23/2019
Loved it please continue!