Ugh, Ron and Hermione have been intimate, they didn't even date, I can't unsee that. I was enjoying it until that reveal, this chapter felt completely different than the previous ones.

This surprised me, how Hermione went from deep in the Nile to up against the shelves in two seconds

Oooh, Blinny. I've always shipped.

NGL, I would stare too.

story is good ,but hermione is annyoing

Wow, Hermione is an a-hole ... so out of character

You're an amazing writer! Loved the fic.

Une jolie progression, tout en suggestion et, en même temps, tout à fait "chaude". Merci.

I liked it. Thank you

I have a really hard time believing Hermione would be such a huge bitch.

Oof baby, this is heating UP.

I liked this chapter! I like their little interactions and the way she kept checking him out.

Argumentation in regard to equality saying that Muggle-borns "just can't help it" (being Muggle-borns, that is) is literally the WORST reasoning in anti-racism campaigns: neither do cockroaches.

Why isn't Hermione talking and laughing with Ron and Harry in the Gryffindor table about her new house? Now they are prisoners of their own houses? And suddenly Hermione know no ravenclaw?
All the plot feels totally forced, artificial, OOC and non believable.

And Draco?
"Your cowardice has certainly disappeared. Perhaps Gryffindor?" ! ? As if it was a flu!? LOL...
A coward always will be a coward... And Draco is a coward, a racist, a cruel bully, and a murderer. He almost killed Katie with a cursed object. He didn't care a sh#t about her life, and send a poisoned bottle of wine and almost killed Ron. Then he opened the gates of his school to a group of terrorists and was essential in the murdering of Dumbledore... Oh, and he was a proud member of a terrorist racist organisation. (And this in 1 min. of thinking) And he isn't in Azkaban? Non believable.

Hermione and Ron don't need to work on anything, they have lived more in the last 7 years than most marriages in 50. They know each other very very deeply, and they have fallen in love, so they aren't going to give up their love, nor can't have any strange fallout because they are in different houses. Non believable at all.

A totally strange Hermione, a terribly OOC Draco, and Ron and Harry totally missing?
It seems this is going to be another incoherent H/D (Hermione never would be with the murderer. And much less a murderer who almost killed Ron) so...

PLEASE, label the fic as D/H. This way people looking for coherent fics will not waste their time, and you will not have reviews telling you things you very probably don't want to know.