Hi, I'm new to the story and you
I'm not a fan of rhaegar and lyana. Far from it. I still tolerate lyana somewhat because of her age and naivety. But not rhaegar...never
He is older, married and fathered children. He knows politics and game of thrones. That he trow away his duties and sense all for the sake of phropecy. Not leaving adequate protection for his wife and children...he is unforgivable to me
I only know one or two fanfic with rhaelle baratheon...and in all including yours, she can be concluded with one word...BADASSᕙ(͡‿ ͡)ᕗ
Love how she smacks rhaegar with words...and that not including elia and rhaella...oh...rhaegar is trully in deep s***t...can't wait＼(o)／
There are some versions of RB, but I like him in yours. Still potential to change for better... definitely not with lyana
Btw, ned had married CT here, right? Oh...can't wait how hoster blows up when his greed and haste cost him the north. There is no way ned will betray her brother
Hope brandon can be a better man and lord...you cannot expect the mother of the next king to fall to a man that not worthy of her...once is more than enough
Can't wait for your update...C U(‿)

I’m fascinated by the turn this story is taking. I enjoy how you portray Rhaegar, he truly thinks that he can do whatever he wants. Will there still be a rebellion? Hope you have time to update soon?

I still stand by my last review. Even as Warden of the North, Brandon cant touch Rhaegar, but he can touch his sister. I really, really, REALLY hope Brandon bans Lyanna from the North and disowns her as a Stark. Brandon maybe reckless, but he did it for his little sister who he thought was kidnapped. Lyanna did everything for herself. And that got her father killed. There is no amount of money that will bring back Rickard Stark and his bannerman sons. Lyanna must be punished!

Well Robert maybe it was because of all the uh.. WHORES ya kinda messed around with.

Hello Mya Stone.

So is Rhaegar a rapist or not. We shall see next chapter!

Or maybe not.

Great story. Please update asap. I need to know what happens next

I really like the interactions of the characters, specially the Stark siblings. And I also liked how you have described Brandon's personality, since he is not a POV we never get to know him beyond the descriptions of others. So is good to read him as a more complex man than just the wild wolf who likes fighting.
I admit that I'm not fan of Rhaegar and Lyanna as a couple, so I enjoy stories in which they face the consequences of their actions

This is fun! Thanks for your work!

Can't Wait for another Update

Please Continue

I hope Brandon bans Lyanna from the North and disowns her from being a Stark. As Warden of the North, Brandon knows that the bannerman will want Lyanna punished for the death of her father, their sons, running away with a married man, insulting House Baratheon, & nearly causing a war. She ruined the Stark reputation and she ruined her own. Lyanna and Rhaegar nearly caused a horrible war and they need to face the consequences. Brandon cant touch Rhaegar, but he can hurt Lyanna. And let's not forget, Dorne will absolutely not stand for insulting Elia. Lyanna & Rhaegar just made themselves enemies of Dorne and the North. Please address this!

The wolf bi**h she is a horrible person to me and her “nice” husband no better. They do not deserve a happy ending. I wish that they get what coming to them and that Elia get a happy ending with her kids. The faith of the seven should not approve of the marriage or that Elia hatches an dragons egg some kind of way from her distant relative. It’s to many stories were Elia get a bad ending and the two love birds get a happy one

I am so loving this story. I absolutely hate that Elia and her children are the ones who get killed due to Rhaegar's choices. Also that they get pushed to the side because it's all about Rhaegar and Lyanna's story. It never made sense that Lyanna can have such a problem with Robert having a bastard child already and POTENTIALLY sleeping around when they got married (they never did so we will never know) but she can run off with a MARRIED man who has LEGITIMATE children with said wife. I really hope that Rhaegar and Lyanna have to face the consequences for their selfish actions.

You describe the hypocrisy of Rheagar and Lyanna beautifully. But you know who is missing? The High Septon of course!

Anxious to read the next chapter! Keep going!

Fuck RL. Fuck the Targeryens. Brandon if he really had wolfblood should leave them to the south to rot. Forbid the traitorous whore and her bloodline from every coming North and force Ned to choose.