Such a cute story, I really enjoyed it!

Oh this was so damn cute! Sweet, and sexy, fun, and flirty all at the same time. I continue to marvel at your ability to take Naley, and put them in any scenario, whether your crafting a brilliant A/U world, or writing one-shots and stories that follow along with the show, and keep them totally in character, so we always recognize them while you explore a brand new world for them. It's brilliant beyond belief, a real talent for sure. And this latest version of our favorite duo was no exception. Your writing never fails to deliver all the feels. Kudos girl!

And let me just say how spot on you were with shy and insecure Nathan, going up against confidant and seductress Haley, lol. The back and forth was brilliant, their banter on point every single time, and nice use of the characters past history together, to create this grown-up adult version of themselves where Haley is comfortable in her own skin and not afraid to be assertive when it comes to going after what she wants, especially the man of her dreams, who just so happens to be her dreamy coworker who she's been trying so hard to impress because she thinks he's not totally interested in her just yet since he won't make a move on her, hehe. And then we have Nathan, whose grown tired of his playboy ways that he was known for in his college days, and all he wants to do is not screw up the best thing that's ever happened to him, and what better person to knock him off his game, than Haley James, lol. Gosh, I loved it all!

Nathan picking up Haley, him meeting her dog Lucy, and the pup being totally smitten with him was beyond adorable. Nathan bringing Haley purple flowers because he remembered it was her favorite color, and then taking her out to her favorite little restaurant right on the water, was an awesome start to their night. Nathan being a nervous wreck all throughout dinner was hilarious, and Haley having fun tempting him was the best. I about fell over when Nathan hit his head under the table trying to discretely pick up his fork that flew off the table while he quickly glanced between Haley's legs, lol. So totally Nathan, lol. I could envision it all, hehe!

So glad that Haley convinced Nathan to come back to her place afterwards, and Haley pressed the issue when she thought that Nathan was rejecting her again, and he finally got the chance to explain his feelings and why he had been resisting making a move on her for so long. Both of them are just so darn adorable together with their insecurities, and it was fantastic when they finally got on the same page, and Nathan finally kissed the hell out of her-yay. It was so worth the wait. Too bad their isn't a follow-up chapter to read all about their hot and steamy night that I'm sure ensued, hehe, but nevertheless, we all know it was beyond amazing, intense, and passionate. It is Naley after all.

Thanks bunches for writing this, as it's another favorites to add to my growing list of incredible stories by you. Hope you'll have some downtime soon to write a bit more. Fingers crossed :)

So cute! Loved it!

I enjoyed this so much. Obviously, Nathan loves Haley in this totally once in a lifetime way, and I love seeing it in different contexts. This reminds me of how he said that he wanted to be good enough to be seen with her- Nathan does idealize Haley (at least at the beginning), and that pattern is definitely evident here. Thanks for the awesome story!

Please continue to write more Naley for us! Your writing and storyline ideas are phenomenal! Please give us another story ASAP!

So cute! Keep up the awesome work!

love loved it
keep writing please

So cute n funny! Wish there was a second chapter with all the naughty bits lol!

Lovw love love

Love your oneshot and I hope you always write about our favorite oth couple. Please continue to write, wish you would do a Naley story with about 10 chapters

LOVED IT so cutee
keep writing NALEY fanfict you are soooo talented

love it!

Really good

Really loved this story. I hope you start writing more again soon