Reviews for A Father's Legacy
Guest chapter 38 . 7/15
I love ninjago I'm rewatching it for the 15 time
Rayllum fan chapter 38 . 7/15
Yay! we got another chapter, but I still want more
Rayllum fan chapter 38 . 7/15
Yay!
Guest chapter 37 . 7/8
I love ninjago
Phantom Frost chapter 24 . 7/6
Must of played some psychonauts or something when coming up with the punch spell
Guest chapter 35 . 6/29
Plz update
YOURLORDANDMASTEROFINTERESTING chapter 34 . 6/26
interesting
Guest chapter 33 . 6/18
Plz update I love this
HeroOfPotatoCity chapter 1 . 6/12
:)
That was really cool! I can already tell you're a good writer.
Pabs117 chapter 32 . 5/22
Hello, am happy to see you again, glad you came back. The chapter was good, it was nice to see more about this story.
Good luck next chapter and in your other stories, i can't wait to see more! :D
Also one question, are Tiadrin and Lain trap inside coins like Runaan?
Joseph Di Tomaso chapter 31 . 4/30
hey, great job so far, please update soon
Mana chapter 31 . 2/24
Ooh! Xadian Protectors, can't wait.
Oh its ok, its just simply my small pet peeve about the Moon Primal. It would've been cool symbolism that Rayla went from the 'shadowy vengeance' (no offense) to 'light angel'.
The Assassins hardly used Moon Magic, their oath ribbon and Runaan's opal didn't count. It just seemed kind of a waste, this applies to all Elves but if they have the Arcanum, they should've been trained in it, ok sure they don't have to be necessarily mages like Lujanne and Ibis but they could've been taught the basics, like high school. That lead me to a cool idea/theory which would change the dynamic of the Human/Elf relations: All Elves are connected to an Arcanum, but not all of their Arcanums are strong enough to produce magic which could explain why the Assassins and Sunfire soldiers rely on their weapons a lot. However, fewer Humans also have Arcanums but its not definite as the Elves so they are free to choose which Primal to have. Which might explain why Rayla was surprised to find out that Callum is a mage. Wonder how things would've been different if the creators went this route.
Til next time.
Kyreg chapter 31 . 2/23
How long have it been since battle for the storm spire in the story? Because not many people know that considering the timeline in the show Callum's and Rayla's birthday should be really soon after ending of season 3. Maybe u could add those to the plot? I didn't saw many fics with their bithdays. But what's most important, explain the timeline cuz i'm confused
Guest chapter 4 . 2/15
Actually the creatures confirmed that the water elves are called tidebound elves not oceanborn
Mana chapter 30 . 2/11
I doubt you can stop Callum from finding an Earthblood teacher Eletha. It would actually be cool if the Elves in the show actually called Callum Sky Changer.
One of the few things that bother me with the Moon Primal, I wish it was just more than illusions, concealment, and connections to Spirits (which I have yet to see) that its just one aspect of Moon magic and Lujanne is just simply proficient and most preferred method of defense for the Moon Nexus. Plus, Moon Primal elves are called MoonSHADOW, I know they look shadowy when exposed to the full Moon, but they could've manipulated the shadows as well. I hope they make it true but I have this awesome idea: the creators said Moon Primal is also about Life and Death, so maybe there are two sides of the Moon (considering Lunar cycles) one side is Death, which is also Shadow, so Runaan and the Assassins use the 'shadow' side of Moon magic which makes sense for their profession (despite that they need the full Moon) and the other side is Life, which I like to call 'Moonlight' which gives life instead of taking like the Assassins. The more 'physical side' of Moon magic could look like that light-bluish energy like the 'Historia Viventum' images and like the ones on Moon Primal creatures. Personally, I would've had Rayla train with a Moon mage on 'Moonlight' to add to her arsenal of awesome (after the battle of the Storm Spire).
Moon has been associated with Sleep/Subconscious, Reflections, Transformation, Gateway to the Spirit world (from folklore), etc (look up Lunar magic/manipulation superpower wiki, it might help).
Til next time.
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