More Please

more

спасибо понравилось
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Unfortunately this is little more than a jumble of paragraphs, some of which are hard to read due to numerous punctuation and grammatical errors. The story itself is rushed and randomly jumps from scene to scene.

And this is a personal gripe, but I'm tired of the "lineage test" trope in HP fanfics.

good story

its good but if you could please add quotations " " to people talking to make it a little easier to read