Reviews for When The Time Is Right
RhizOneill chapter 3 . 2/14
Really enjoy reading this so far. I would love to hear more of this story soon.
Hand chapter 3 . 1/29
I like this story so far but will it have a point and go somewhere?
as much as Im sure people will read Cole struggling on how to raise Ben but I would like to know that this story is going somewhere.

Seeming as you fast forwarded Ben's age and showed that dream sequence, maybe Ben will grow to resent Phoebe and when they find out she tries struggles to have a connection with him like Chris and Leo, or Cole meets another woman and falls for her. Ben sees this woman as his mother and Phoebe feels hurt later on or something else.

thats just my two cents on ideas but I really like this story so i hope the story goes somewhere awesome because you have come up with a great idea here.
hope you update soon
chimera629 chapter 1 . 1/25
So why doesn't kol have his bathazar powers or a bunch of powers from the wasteland
lizardmomma chapter 3 . 1/21
that dream sequence really tugs at the heart strings
Lady Isabelle Black chapter 2 . 1/19
Please update soon
Jessica chapter 2 . 1/15
Are you going to finish it?
I would love to read the rest of it because it is really goooooood
I hope you see these because I can't wait to see the next chapter with Cole and Ben
Jessica chapter 1 . 1/15
Hi
this story is amazing
I absolutely love it
Charmed Forever Fan chapter 2 . 12/10/2019
I like that you have him telekinesis like pure and I like that fact that Ben is good can't wait to see were you take this I didn't like that there baby died in the TV show.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
The first two chapters are fantastic! Can't wait for more.
lizardmomma chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
very nice
lizardmomma chapter 1 . 12/6/2019
great start, I wanted to read more