I found tobias is a coward and stupid even if he is under a spell, he should be at least trustful he has proven himself a pathetic that even doesn't deserve to be loved.

Blasted Jeanine is at it again, she keeps Tobias under a very tight leash, i'm sure she figured out his game .. Here we are again with this truth serum ! I hope Tobias and Tris will manage to speak and clear the air about this silly misunderstanding.. I wonder what's become of Molly, she was bleeding so perhaps she just did not make it ? good chapter, look forward to the next one thanks again.

Oh no. I hate Jeanine and her form of truth serum. Ugh. I hope Tris is able to talk to Tobias soon. He has misunderstood and I hate that.

oh, poor tobiashe doesn't listen well, like all men hahaha

nice chapter!

Psycho queen is bringing out the big guns. Ugh. I hate her.

nooooo

What is happening? Mixed letters-ohh the intrigue

It’s poison Tobias! Get it tested! Stop being naive about Jeanine!

great story so far! Keep it up.

Sounds like a Harry Potter book with all this magic! love this book of the Future..who wouldn't right?
Of course her future has been rewritten, she's not going to remain a plain poor boring girl from abnegation, her character and personality traits are plainly evident that she does not fit there! Incidently i would not put it past Jeanine to have interfered with it all somehow behind the scenes, she's a witch with bad black magic in my opinion - Love the letters falling off the page onto Tris' notebook... somebody's been very creative with a wonderful imaginary vision! Brilliant.. As much as we don't know the meaning i am sure there's a correlation with Tobias and his royal position. Look forward to the next update already - Thank you so much. Keep well and safe everybody.

Hmmm...what an odd experience she had with the Book of Truth! I hope that the letters will continue to sort themselves out as Tris progresses on her path to Tobias’s heart. I wonder if the confusion might be a result of Jeanine’s future meddling? I’m placing a bet on that having an impact on the jumbled letters.

Fun chapter!

Of course it’s being rewritten. Jeanine is messing with her. At least she got to take the letters with her. Maybe one day they can make sense.

Interesting. I wonder what the book of truth is trying to tell her. Thanks for updating. I miss Tobias.

Yay! I did a little happy dance when I saw a new chapter was here. This story is just so sweet an enchanting; I'm enjoying it very much!

nice chapter