Wow, I keep saying that. You keep in the edge every chapter. I keep thinking I'm right and then you throw another curve ball! I want answers but I'm loving this too much to see it end. Again, can't WAIT for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing and stay safe.

On a side note, I just rewatched (for the 20th time?) "The Lost Generation" and can definitely hear Rufus using uh-ha.

My goodness. So much to unload here.
Did I just read children... as in... plural? There's more than Tenley? Or did I misread that? And I love how Wyatt quickly picked up that James Dean was a sleeper. Wyatt's still got game (*snort* can't believe I just said that). I'm really, really intrigued to know what the actual hell is going on.
Bloodstone still feels like it should be our enemy? But... they're coming across as not?
The further we get into this, the more questions I have... I am DYING to know. I've said this before and I'm saying this again. You have a fantastic knack for grabbing hold of readers and keeping us hooked.

Flynn remained a gentleman, as he always been. Some men would have taken advantage of this situation but not him. You depicted his personality very well. I liked that a lot. Same thing for Wyatt, always suspicious of everybody even his own daughter! I think this is a good thing that Flynn stayed behind with Tenley : this will give those two time to reconnect and the Team might need them for somekind of a rescue mission. What an impressive story! You make us want some more !

Wow! I loved it! Rowan wasn't a backstabbing bastard after all... :) Can't say the same about Quinn. Good thing Flynn was there for Tenley. What an exceptional man. I now proceed to the next chapter in a good mood.

Wow, edge of my seat action! Very well written and full of suspense. I lean towards Wyatt being right about Rittenhouse's use of Tenley, but we shall see. Flynn is flynning it up as usual, but will it be enough. How are they going to get out of this mess?

On a lighter note, Wyatt is going to be just beside himself with the cars and the racing... Will Lucy be able to rein him in or will he challenge James Dean?

Can't wait for the next chapter! Stay safe.

HOLY MOLY. SHIT IS ABOUT TO GO DOWN. I am first off in shock to see that they're here for James Dean. Things are about to get real.
Rufus's quips are hilarious as usual. I love him!
Also... YIKES. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS IN THE BUNKER. LIKE, YESTERDAY.
This is so brilliant and intense. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Finally, Tenley is reunited with Flynn and her family. Now, they must face the challenge of helping her remember who she really is. I love the way you described how Flynn silently comforted Tenley. I am now gladly proceeding to the next chapter to see what you have imagined for the continuation of this story. Congrats !

So many questions...again. What happened to Quinn when he returned to Rittenhouse after shooting Rowan? How did they get that new Death Star ship? Although I'm pretty sure Jiya had something to do with that. I feel for Wyatt. First his not dead wife is a spy, then his son betrays him. What is he supposed to think about his not yet born daughter (now that is just a weird sentence )? Now what is going to happen to the Time Team as they head out without the pen? More questions!? Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing and stay safe.

I can feel it... SHIT IS ABOUT TO GO DOWN.
The first thing that gave it away was the fact that they left the pen... I don't know if I'm prepared.
Second... what if... Tenley has a tracking device or something on her? I'm just spitballing and I'm probably dead wrong but that would lead the bad guys... be it Rittenhouse or Bloodstone... right to their door.
THAT SAID... My heart is so broken for Tenley. Like, I'm literally fighting back tears because of the way she feels. At the same time, I understand everyone's uncertainty. Though, Wyatt is being a monumental, moody, pain in the ass. I'm tempted to punch him, or, smack the attitude out of him... he needs to chill his brooding manner.
Then again, I understand why he's being so moody... ugh.
Anywaysssss, fantastic job at making me feel all the feels. I'm like shaking I'm so excited and nervous for what's about to come. Keep up the great work!

So Bloodstone is actually from the future! I did not see that coming. I don't know if what I was putting together is correct. I'm like Rufus, how did they get that machine? Now that I've picked my jaw off the floor, I really need the next chapter. Great twists just keep coming. Can't wait for what's to come! Thanks for sharing and keep safe.

Wow! So, for Chapter 36, was Flynn Jane Autsen's inspiration for Mr. Darcy? I could so see it. And Jiya talked with Quinn during the rescue? I'm beginning to piece some of this together, but then you have surprised me with your twists before. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe.

Is there going to be more chapters?!

Every chapter brings more surprises. Has Quinn been flipped? What is going to happen to Emma (nothing good I hope)? How is Amy/Tenley going to find out her truth. I couldn't stop reading your story even if I wanted to, which I dont. Holding my breath for the next chapter!

I swear, this house is insane. I love it. I want to have the ability to have all these places to hide from my problems.
I swear, each chapter just keeps getting better and better... I am really intrigued by Bloodstone right now. I thought I had them pegged but tbh, I'm still figuring them out. Gah! So many secrets. I feel like Rufus, stuck in random corners unsure of what's going on. Poor Rufus needs a break, btw.
And Flynn. He had to face parting ways with her again. He's having a rough 2020 with the rest of us.
Brilliant chapter. The flow and pace kept me on edge, as well as sucked me in. I felt like I was right there with the time team. I could see Miss Winchester, the house, and everything as if I was in the moment. Keep up the fantastic work.

O. M. G. The twists and turns are killing me! We already know Rittenhouse is evil...and especially Emma. But now, Bloodstone? Are they good, or bad or just there for the opportunity. You have really done a great job at keeper the reader on their seat. Please keep writing and post the next chapter soon...please.